Asw jadi meme dimana2 cok wkwk

Warmth around Christmas carol is very nice indeed. Astonishingly satisfying. Thank you.

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good stuff

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how to tame your horny and slutty gyaru girlfriend WITH LOVE

prequel:https://e-hentai.org/g/2018991/fe517d8b8f/
RAW:https://e-hentai.org/s/6b5342838c/2094549-240

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Tame? Seemed like she was manipulating him from the note at the end, if he gets jealous he will assault you.

means she plans on making him jealous

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Everything is according to her plan.

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I see you got a proofreader. However, still plenty to work on. So much, in fact, that I still have to tag this as poor grammar. Some editing advice below too.

Still, better than whatever the fuck you did with your previous doujin.

p.1 "No one's at home..." => No one's home.
p.2 "These stuffs." => This stuff.
p.6 Yeah I am => Yeah, I am.
p.8 Missing 2 commas and at least one period/ellipses on that sentence spanning 3 bubbles.
p.9 "I said in the beginning didn't I i'm a faithful person" => I said it in the beginning, didn't I? I'm a faithful person.
p.10 "Do you want to stop after this far?" => after coming this far.
p.10 "That'd be a problem" => missing period.
p.13 "Go ahead and enjoy" => Missing period and probably better to spell it out as "Go ahead and enjoy them."
p.16 "[...] that easily" => missing period.
p.16 "By the way let's go shopping tomorrow" => By the way, // let's go shopping tomorrow.
p.16 There's more punctuation issues on that page, but you get the idea.

1. Please export black and white images as grayscale PNGs, not RGB JPGs. This is to a) avoid artifacting; b) preserve quality; c) de-bloat.
2. Please level your pages. This is literally scanlation 101. See cleaning guide below.
3. You might want to practice your typesetting. General rules: text size should always match the original. Try to center your text. Make it aesthetically pleasing, but also try not to hyphenate like a madman.
4. Punctuate and capitalize. Often missing capitalization and commas.
5. Watch out for dust (text remnants). These pollute your bubbles. Guide below.
6. Please actually proofread. You have 2 pairs of eyes now, there's no excuse.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

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She's totally still fucking all those other dudes.

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Jesus christ, you got a proofreader and STILL the grammar is this horrendous?

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oalah gw ngerti siapa ini wkowkowkowkowo

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