What started out as a 4 page comic commission turned into a bigger personal project lol.

It was a fun time, though I do wish I could've worked on it some more. the typesetting isn't as great as I'd like it to be, and I think I went too hard on the captions and dialogue, the ending in particular i wanted to do another 3 pages to really end on a bigger note, but with work and the new year coming, I wouldn't have been able to finish this before the end of the year, and I have a bigger project starting next year that I really need to prioritize over anything else art wise. I didn't make my guy pay for the com though, just felt like it'd be wrong to charge him for something i turned into my own thing. He enjoyed the content though so that's good.

In the end, I think compared to the very first comic I ever posted, this is a major improvement artwise. Though I still have a long long way to go before I can even consider myself on the same level as the people I personally idolize, like Nuezou, Dekosuke, Keoya, kagami uekusa, Kurosu Gatari, takeda hiromitsu, not to mention the western artists like Eigaka, dmxwoops, Stand-by, EU03, LiveForTheFunk, just to name a few of them. The coming year is gonna be pretty busy, with the bi-monthly chapters i want to put out for the comic, pin-up practice, art practice, learning japanese, it'll be a productive year for sure and i'm all for it.

Have a good one ya'll. Hope the holidays were good to you, and hopefully the new year is good to us.

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where you can find my usual art or retweets of much better artists, along with my stream, haven't done any in a while but I'll try to do one every sunday starting next year around 11pm PST.

gotta spaced out the text and remember than less is more but do keep it up with NTR ways~ hot stuff!

Base +6, Bubblejum +6, Clayton Smith +6, bruisingsaint +6

I'll keep that in mind! I'm still more used to book writing instead of comic writing so learning to balance both and still maintain the appeal i think i have going on is a bit hard. Though the more I do it the more i'll be able to convey things better with less words. Thank you for the advice!

Base +7, Bubblejum +6, bruisingsaint +6

it's great that you accurately portray both blacks and your cuck fans.

keep up the good work.

Base +7, Clayton Smith +6

Honestly, I'm sad to see it be ntr. When I saw the pic I was excited to see it but after watching I'm honestly shaken a bit bc it had some elements I liked in it. Sorry to be negative but I gotta be honest and say it.

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Very hot, very good. The proportions are generically overblown, but you make it work. Even the text is hot, and reading it feels good, which is a rarity. Keep it up and keep honing your craft

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