Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1674235/1efe956c63/

I like how ambiguous the ending is because Anda makes all touhou super slutty in his doujins so Marisa wanting to be the fuckpet of a hypnotist and is actually unaffected by it could be a thing

Base +5, TenRX -7, Captian Katsura -7, LightSolas -5, RefinedFapper -6, dj756 -6, lazorboy96 -6, Lomped -6, Nightwolf5251 -6

Just some editing advice for you. You've been doing this for a while, so I assume you'd want to improve. TL looks good, though.

1. Please level your pages. The colors are so faded here. Guide below (cleaning).
2. Please export black and white images as grayscale PNGs, not RGB JPGs. This is to a) avoid artifacting; b) preserve quality; c) de-bloat.
3. Please redraw. I see you often remove JP text, but leave white blotches where it used to be. Redrawing the missing portions of the images after cleaning is (unfortunately) a basic aspect of scanlation. It requires time and practice, but this is the first thing that catches the eye.
4. Your typesetting is fine overall, but still linking a guide below. General rules: text size should always match the original. Try to center your text. Make it aesthetically pleasing, but also try not to hyphenate like a madman.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

Base +13, baneonplane +5, LSouza +6, gotobedquentin +6, Shaganyu +6

the semen of p5 was drawn like a pile of frog's egg
i just wanna have a bubble tea again.

Base +1, notfunnyguy +6, Winter is Cumming +6, Lomped +6, lazorboy96 +6, Shaganyu +6