This was my first time translating, and while I still have a lot to learn, I feel like this was a pretty good first effort from me. It took quite a while to translate as I'm still a Japanese language learner, but I'm sure I'll get faster as I gain more experience. Happy holidays, merry Christmas, happy new year, and I hope you enjoy!

Version 2
Changelog:

- Translated moans
- Better conversational flow
- Better formatting
- Different fonts
- Removed Herobrine

Wow, these are some cute faces.
Also wow, they are short. And I appreciate that the male character isn't an ugly bastard in this one.

Regarding the TL, this is a pretty solid first attempt. The typesetting is pretty good, too, although if possible in the future you should try to avoid the:

too much
sex
might be
a
problem

alternation pattern (long-short-long) - in that box at the bottom left of page 36, for instance. In typography, lone words on a line are called "orphans" and are typically seen as something to be avoided. Of course, If you have a choice between bad visuals and bad translation, the bad visuals should be preferred. You can't always have it all.
This is nothing life-ending, and this is still a five star gallery for me, but just a bit of advice from someone else who's involved in scanlating sometimes. My last attempt had its own problems, too.

You did a nice job positioning text in the bubbles and such, which is something I always struggle with.
Anyway: This is really excellent for being the first time. It looks like you did some research or note taking on how others were doing things. Good job.

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Here's some advice, tips, and resources to help you out. Also, please check out the Rename Petition to see how to properly name your galleries.

Not bad for a first attempt. I've seen worse from "experienced" "translators".

1. Please export black and white images as grayscale PNGs, not RGB JPGs. This is to a) avoid artifacting; b) preserve quality; c) de-bloat.
2. Please level your pages. See cleaning guide below. This USUALLY doesn't apply to digital versions, but it will come in handy.
3. You might want to practice your typesetting. General rules: text size should always match the original. Try to center your text. Make it aesthetically pleasing, but also try not to hyphenate like a madman.
4. Punctuate and capitalize. Punctuation isn't optional in English, even though JP versions rarely do it.
5. Watch out for dust (text remnants). These pollute your bubbles. Guide below.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

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Missing pages 7, 38, and 39. Click here, here, and here for reference.

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shortstack oyakodon is something we need more of

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This seems to be a sequel of https://e-hentai.org/g/1819506/9eff58549f/ this I think?

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I feel like a mouse caught in a maze, but the walls of the maze are the dialog and the cheese is understanding what the fuck is going on

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for p2+p3, if you have access to textless drawings (like p5/6), you should use them as a base instead of trying to cover up the text

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"Haruka is married to her husband"

That's how it tends to work, yes.

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Thought it was Raikou on the cover.

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Thanks for the feedback! I've actually entirely used the macOS app Preview for this whole thing... but that's why I had to do some of the things I did, since there was no option to otherwise haha.

I've since picked up a copy of Photoshop CC, so I'll be revising this over the coming days to bring it up to industry standards. I hope to be done at last by Friday (so I can be done with this darn thing at last!)
Sorry about those three pages... I forgot them...

Thanks all!
-MidnightSun

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Aint this part of the series?
https://e-hentai.org/g/1819506/9eff58549f/

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nice translation. Please fix the french part in you signature, it's soleil de minuit

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I was happy to see a continuation of those two. Something oddly wholesome about those two stepsiblings.

@dragontamer8740
I know, right? So much stuff comes out where it's some 400lb bald monstrosity...

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Thanks for the translation. It seems page 9 (the wide page) is in resample resolution. E-hentai automatically downsamples every image to 1280x width for gallery viewing. This is especially bad for wide pages as it can make them very small. In this case, the size isn't much smaller from the original, but with a higher resolution gallery the quality reduction can be pretty severe.

If you download images the normal way, you get the reduced quality version. However there are a few ways you can get the original version. If you plan on making more translations in the future you should always make sure that you have the original images for editing.

Here are some ways you can download any gallery in its original quality:
1) Download the gallery via torrent, however avoid torrents labeled with 1280x
2) Click on "Archive Download" and then "Download Original Archive", note that this costs you GP.
3) If you prefer to download each image individually, you should use the "Download Original Source" link below each opened image.

Also avoid using aggregator sites such as NH as the source for your raws. While these sites copy their galleries from e-hentai, they only copy the resample version. If you can't access the raw on e-hentai, you can try searching sukebei.nyaa for a torrent. Torrents are usually original quality unless labeled otherwise.

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Huh, I never even thought twice about that, thanks for the info!

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