https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ361846.html
English version

New Mokuseirokku, sweet! Thanks for uploading!

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Pulease learn how to make decent text....this hurts the eye.

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And English. This is barely coherent; I might've understood more of the plot if the text wasn't there :Ü™

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This is like a compilation of samples

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Note that this is the "official" English version off of DLSite.

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why does the poor grammar tag not apply if it's the "official" translation? if the translation is shit, whether it's official or not it's still poor grammar. this is unfappable, I'd rather be fapping to moonrunes I can't read because then I wouldn't even have to try

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What's even going on in the story that starts at page 55? Did the sports girl lose her dick or something?

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