Raws: https://e-hentai.org/g/1534355/ff95f40ef3/
Script I made to translate: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?act=Attach&type=post&id=160811

I made this to look like the kind of live translation I see when playing a visual novel with an external tool.
I also tried to keep the translation as close to the japanese as possible, not attempting to completely rewrite it to make it "better english", since it's meant to be seen along the original text (that is still here).

If you want to make a rewrite (I could understand that since I made it in a unique way), don't hesitate to use the "script" available above, it's hosted as a forum attachment, and contains the japanese characters I painfully identified to find how to translate things, as well as a romaji version. Those are work tools, not meant to look great, but it could save you a few hours of work.

I still have the "half-raws" with a black transparent textbox added on top, though I can't make torrents, so it's not provided in any way by default.

The uploader of the raws asked support for the artist, sharing the link https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=302203 but it doesn't work for me (maybe you have to register), still I agree that was good (it did get me to attempt to translate it lol)

edit: Fixed the script link (storing from a restricted forum was a bad idea lol). This time I tested in another browser not logged in and the access worked, so should work for everyone.

The link to the script doesn't seem to work, at least for me. You need to have a pixiv account to see hs other works, and I recommend it because he has a lot of good works. He is also now working on a SAO visual novel where the girls get brainwashed into harem slaves. Also, here's his twitter account https://twitter.com/inikanata

Edit: Now it does

Last edited on 15 January 2022, 19:47.

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It only took two years to finally see this translated, but it is nice to see after I posted the original raw ages ago.

WOOT!

Extra note: Yes, you need to join Pixiv to see the originals. I joined ages ago just for some of the art there. There is plenty of great art and artists.

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will you post more translated story of him?

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So the MC is who and what Noboyuki Sugou of Sword Art Online fame wish he could have become.

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