Original Work: [KRS] Haruna to Mikan ga Jikan Teishi Sarete Okasareru Yatsu (To Love-Ru)

Translated with: Capture2text

Professionals have standards.

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bruh moment

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"translated", you keep using that word, I don't think it means what you think it means

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Poor grammar tag requirement: at least 10 grammatical or spelling errors per 40 pages

page 1:
1. "She's not three popular" the fuck is three popular?
2. "I wonder if there's no connection for the rest of my life" should be "the unpopular me would never get to know them in this lifetime"
3. "What is the power" it's not power, it's a mecha/robot, imagine one of Lala's inventions. Even if it WAS a "power", it should be "this power"
4. "falling on" it's not falling, it's fallen.
5. "on this roadside" it should be "the" roadside, not "this"
6. "is three" THE FUCK IS THREE?!?
extra 1. "the power of the rehearsal" even if you ignore the fact the clear MTL translated "Rito" as "rehearsal" and "power" as "baka"(idiot), wtf is the power of the rehearsal?
7. "at all three" THE FUCK IS THREE?!?!??!?!?!?
extra 2. "Lively as ever, I agree" this line is actually the closest to the original in this entire fucking page 1. It's actually "Lively as ever I see"

page 3:
extra 3. "One wow" fuck you, give me two wows! Just kidding, he's making a surprised "uwaa" here
8. "If you pick up the power" it should be "I" instead of "you"
9. "It's stuck D" if your D is stuck in time too we don't have a hentai. Even if it was, it should be "got stuck", not "it's stuck".

page 4:
10. "three who do not notice" WHAT. THE. FUCK. IS. THREE?!????!??

it's already 10 i'm not going through the rest of this.
Verdict: three/10

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The whole thing is basically gibberish. Even if you look past the mistranslation and semantic issues, there are a few issues with spelling/grammar.

[p1]
"she's not three popular" - three?!
"What is the power that is falling on this roadside is three" - too many verbs ("is" appears twice); also, wtf is three?
"In addition, the power of the rehearsal At all three!" - I don't know if this is supposed to be one sentence or two, but there is no verb and "at all three" makes no sense

[p5]
"One wow!" - did you mean "oh wow"?
"If you pick up the power, the surroundings" - another sentence fragment missing a verb
"It's stuck D,," - what is the "D" part? typo?

[p11]
"Warm and three slimy and three" - those threes still make no sense

[p13]
"Pleasant three!" - see above; you seem to be using "three" as a noun, a verb, an adjective, an adverb, etc. and none of it makes any sense

[p17]
"Hahaha 3 it was really good" - same issue, but "three" is now spelled "3" for some reason
"Suddenly the mecha shines and three" - ditto
"I wonder if the time is gung." - "gung" is not even a word

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"capture2text"

Reading this, surely it's capture3text.

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afaik the "three" that keeps showing up is because his OCR is probably misreading the ellipses ((...)) as 三 (three) instead.

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I'd rather this have been a grammatically-correct rewrite, but all I got was a THREEwrite.

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