Page 6:
"I used to think about doing with Senpai a lot before we go out."
should be
"I used to think a lot about doing it with Senpai before we started going out."

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Thank you for the translation! By the way, there's already tankoubon version of this chapter and have less censorship, maybe you can considered replaced this with that version?

That Kak Seto Kaiba on the last page tho lmao

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Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/1907415/d11ff00454/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2042399/fc8056d4ae/
Part 3: Here

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Kak Seto Kaiba 👍
Terima kasih sudah men-TL doujinshi ini, Atang!

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from nosy kouhai https://e-hentai.org/g/1907415/d11ff00454/
to clingy and jealous GF https://e-hentai.org/g/2042399/fc8056d4ae/
and now horny "almost wife" who masturbate with her "almost husband" smell
this girl's love journey is a wild ride

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That was fast

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Alternative translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/2124118/18ca777e83/

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Another classic atang.

10 mistakes required for the tag.

p.1 started moving in => you don't "start moving in" with someone. "since I've moved in with"
p.1 everyday => every day
p.3 everyday => every day
p.5 about doing with senpai => about doing IT with senpai
p.5 with the fingers of his manly rough hands => this doesn't make sense. fingers are ALWAYS associated with hands, so it's redundant here. "with his rough, manly fingers" or something similar.
p.5 imagining it in my head => another syntactically incorrect redundancy
p.8 did you hold it all in during business trip => your business trip
p.8 i don't really have much free time => i didn't. he's talking about his past business trip.
p.8 all the things you just said makes me => make me
p.11 you're still want => you

Last edited on 27 January 2022, 03:09.

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