Author- https://www.deviantart.com/gentlegolem/gallery/all

Weird comic, but not awful by any means. Wonder why it was downvote bombed.

*Edit* I want Amber to win. I like her overall bitchy/craziness. Unfortunately, my guess is she'll be left out in the cold.

*Second edit*

And there's the boring turn I predicted. Ho-hum. The 'bad' woman loses, the milquetoast girl - defended by her ripped chad who likes to monologue - wins, and the useless friends show up like Scooby and the gang to drag the evil demoness to a fate we can't be bothered to know.

Yawn.

I really wish authors would stop with the self-inserts on these fap comics. Rule #1 of porn: naughty girls are hotter than nice ones. Marry the nice one. But write your fuck comics about the bad ones.

Last edited on 29 January 2022, 13:38.

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@BattleshipGascogne the monologue on pg 64 is cringe and the direction of the story towards an unearned "happy" ending is disappointing, I agree.

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