竟然还有续作，nice

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跟前作画风差距太大了吧

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If you're here and confused by how much worse the art is... get in line since no one has any idea why it's like this. Neither Twitter, nor the review section in DMM, nor the Afterword offer any explanation.

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@Nlimited
I had to check his other books to make sure it was the same author lol. He's advertising his on going series "coffee moon" at the last page, so I assume he was super busy and just rushed it. Sales and reviews on dmm are so brutal, it's deserved but still sad. Anyways hope his series works well for him

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好像未完成品 衣物摺痕、手指關節的陰影未補 上線塗黑到一半就放上架賣
P20那頁更奇怪 前兩本定點鏡頭大爆射 就你這頁根本線稿

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就是个半成品，牡丹现在都上岸了，画风更加精进。本书的风格简直就像个刚出道的人画的，难听点，大概率是糊弄糊弄，毕竟岸上还是他现在的主业，同人志就随便画了。

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我记得牡丹好像在上岸作附录里说过自己得了病，对色色的东西彻底失去兴趣，画了上岸作咖啡之月之后才有所好转，不知道是不是因为这个原因，当然也有可能是他摆大烂了

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畫面隨便就算了 這次連劇情都沒有前作的味道

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這是發生什麼事…

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作者这是完全摆烂了啊。从头到尾简笔画。

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