My second colouring, think I've improved a lot this time around, feel free to offer criticism since that'd help a lot, thanks.

Its good, thanks for colouring, maybe a little more shadow/light in some parts, and the skin color is the only thing I can add, hope you keep with the colouring, maybe another doujin from this artist., keep it up.

Base +6, scentedcollector +9, Raiya95 -7, denisimo2253 +5

It turned out very well! If I can find any flaw, it would be in the color of the skin. I hope you continue coloring, if possible you could color the continuation of this doujin.

Base +1, scentedcollector +9, Raiya95 -7

My only complains would be that the mid tones of the ink dont mix well with your flats and having the same tone in the background washes the intensity of the scenes.

Base +6

I think you're doing a great job but like the others said, maybe more midtones. I sent you a message on the forums.

Base +6

Scan: https://e-hentai.org/g/2347459/ae22d56615/
Digital: https://e-hentai.org/g/1629419/0c6ac9e0f5
Digital English Colorized: https://e-hentai.org/g/2134746/b799d09818
"up": [
"male:hairy",
"female:big breasts",
"female:emotionless sex",
"female:nakadashi",
"other:mosaic censorship",
"female:hair buns"
],
"down": [
"male:virginity"
]

Base +1