My first time translating and cleaning a doujin so apologies for anything that's off. I did this for fun and figured I might as well post since I had it anyway. Also credit to the translators on Danbooru who's translations I scooped for the 10 pages or so.

EDIT:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2139407/c6efc36810/

Another scanlation by someone more experienced.

tfw no gf with "Dead Fish Eyes" and also remember the rules dont stick ur lance in crazy

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Eh disaster? If it wasn't for her room I wouldn't say that be a disaster, and even then I could be convinced she's just being really paranoid after getting out of a shit relationship. Definitely go with her though when she confronts her ex.

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"dont stick ur lance in crazy"
bitch, this man stick his lance in crazy and heal the crazy of her mental trauma with the POWER OF DICK

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/2099142/73bb698c95/

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Typesetting is ok, cleaning is also ok, though if I were to be strict, I can see spots where it's a bit shoddy but all in all it's decent cleaning. Not sure why you went for blurry text on pg 9, and it's not aligned to the lines either.
Translation quality is quite questionable. Ironically, the parts where you translated had better quality than the danbooru notes, though your translation gets very literal at times.

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@Ass Spanker I need to figure out how to rotate text without it bluring. I had a few ideas, but my head was exploding at the time, so I just let it be. The easy answer is probably just use something besides GIMP.

I should have double checked the Danbooru translations, but they seemed good enough, and I have a strong aversion to redoing work that's already done. If I was taking this more seriously would have just done it all from scratch.

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Resources for you. Yes, I encourage you to use PS.

>danbooru translations
Playing with fire.

>rotate text without blurring
Use the Free Transform option when you select a text layer.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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@ uploader
If you want to rotate text in GIMP without blurring you have to take a little detour.
1. type your text normally
2. convert the text into a path by either clicking right on the text or textlayer in the layer window and select "Text to path"
3. create a new empty layer for your rotated text
4. manipulate the path with the regular tools until you reached the desired result
5. activate the path tool and select the path
6. fill the path

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Surprise wholesomeness.

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if it weren't for that extra page with the karaoke it could have been left open for a "bad end" where the ex catches her and does all kinds of horrible stuff. sure glad it didn't.

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