I'm half Japanese and I'm currently taking hentai commissions!

Discord: Rasmus#6436
Email: rasmusthetranslator@gmail.com

This was really fun, thank you :D

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Thank you!

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Hot, but ended rather abruptly. Is there a sequel or something?

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thx for upload :)

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Story comes across as pointless to me

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Great facial expressions, art, and fetish stuff. Thanks for translating this for us, Rasmus.

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No problem guys, glad you liked it :D

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The ending was rushed, And i feel like the other guy wasn't needed. It would've been a better story if it was only about femdom, Adding the other character ruined the storyline especially sense his role took place in the last 3 pages

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Good themes and expressions. The story was nice but I feel like parts were missed or not interpreted as well as they could have been because of a sub par translation. The second page is completely untranslated and there is untranslated text on most of the pages. The chat bubble cleaning is very sloppy and rushed. The translation in general is lacking, plagued with sentences like "I just taught him a few stuff in bed earlier"

Art 7. Plot 7. Sexiness 8. Translation 3. All out of 10.

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Hi @Jenkitsune

Thanks for the criticism! Japanese and English are both my first languages and they are perfectly done. I translated exactly what was written in the speech bubbles, so your critique regarding lackluster speeches applies to the original author, not me.

The second page is just disclaimer and copyright info written by the author, it has nothing to do with the story.

I agree regarding the somewhat sloppy typesetting, but that is because I wasn't paid very well. Subpar pay = subpar work.

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