From COMIC HOTMILK 2019-01

Pija, your wife is temporary, hentai is forever. Go back to work!
lmao

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Thank you! Pija is in my top ten.
Shame even the butthole is completely censored lol

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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semen oozing out of a fully white hole has to be the funniest looking shit.

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Alright, I guess I really do have to point out your mistakes now that you're doing gyarus. This is bordering on a rewrite. My advice: please learn the language.

rough translation - 10 mistakes

Page 1
Your TL: W-wait Hime-chan!
JP text:: ひっ姫ちゃん！
Author intent: He never asks her to wait. "H-Hime-chan!"

Page 1
Your TL: Stop it! I'm going to-
JP text: もうだめ。出ちゃう出ちゃう！！
Author intent: Not sure why you keep it vague when the JP text is very upfront and direct. "I can't take it anymore! I'm cumming! I'm cumming!!"

Page 1
Your TL: Today is my safe day so you can cum inside me anytime you want~
JP text: 今日は中出しさせてあげるって言ったんだから
Author intent: Never does she mention a safe day. In fact, this made-up addition completely contradicts the rest of the doujin.

Page 1
Your TL: Please
JP text: パ～パ
Author intent: Daddy, not please.

Page 2
Your TL: Your insides are amazing, Hime-chan!
JP text: 姫ちゃんの中！！姫ちゃんに中出し！！
Author intent: He never mentions her insides being amazing. "Hime-chan's insides! I'm gonna creampie you, Hime-chan!"

Page 2
Your TL: Ahn!
JP text: パパすごい
Author intent: You're amazing, daddy!

Page 2
Your TL: I can't wait for daddy's cum!
JP text: ひめのおまんこ孕ませたくて
Author intent: "I want you to knock up my [Hime's] pussy and [...]"

Page 2
Your TL: ...
JP text: ヒメちゃんｘ２
Author intent: You omitted these lines. "Hime-chan" x2

Page 3
Your TL: Nnh
JP text: すごお・・・
Author intent: Awesome...

Page 3
Your TL: Fresh semen is so hot... I love creampies.
JP text: 中出し・・・せーしあったかくて気持ちい～・・・
Author intent: Not at all what she says. She's saying how the load he blew inside her feels good and warm. She doesn't say she likes creampies. She doesn't mention the semen being fresh.

Page 3
Your TL: Before you leave
JP text: せーしビュッってして
Author intent: Even accounting for the other lines, this is wrong. "Spurt out your cum. // [by making use of my entire body]"

Last edited on 16 February 2022, 16:59.

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Please work on both your English and Japanese before translating, cheers.

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