Noticed that the translation for this doujin used a bad scan, so wanted to update it with the digital version + made some tweaks of my own.

This is my first time typesetting, so hopefully did a good job. Appreciate any feedback!

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/s/003ca27c98/1418605-5

Shamelessly copied comment from klermun:

Unfortunately you fell for the newbie trap and used the 1280x resolution resample pages for editing instead of the original raw which is around ~1410 x 2024. For gallery viewing, e-hentai downsamples all images to 1280x resolution so if you downloaded the pages without using the original source link, you got the reduced version instead.

Another possibility is that you downloaded the raw from one of the aggregator sites such as NH. These sites only copy galleries from e-hentai at resample quality and thus don't have the original resolution versions available. You shouldn't use these sites as a source for your raws.

Always check that you're using the original raw before you start editing. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x something, then most of the time that means something is wrong and you got the wrong version.

Here's some ways you can download the original full resolution version of any gallery on e-hentai:
1) Torrent download if a torrent is available. Avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive download and then Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the Download Original Source link located below each opened image in the gallery.

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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Thank you 🙏

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Quote: "This is my first time typesetting, so hopefully did a good job."

Well, there's not really a nice way to say it, just a polite way. Sorry, but you didn't do a good job. Despite the already pointed out reduced resolution RAWs, you also used the ugly as fuck newbie trap font Manga Temple and sometimes some left aligned bubbles slipped in like on the top of page 4. This is unfortunately not good, just mediocre at best.

But if you really want to improve here are some links that provide useful resources:
https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
AnonBlack's Typesetting Guide: https://mangadex.org/title/08e1f85a-bb12-4fe4-aec5-0d7a80b3a261/anonblack-s-typesetting-guide?tab=chapters
https://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/index.html
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main

There are tons of doujinshis previously mistreated by the editor, or with newer and better highres scans and also translated chapters that would benefit from an edit from magazine to tank scans out there.

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Ancient-Alien, I appreciate the feedback and the link to sources. I will read up on typesetting and probably revisit this once I am better at it. This is one of my favorite bonten doujins so I would like a high quality version of it available for everyone.

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