Hi, some additional notes for this and maybe future translations

- Some non-essential text won't get translated like sound effects
- Some of the original meaning might get altered just a little bit (does not change the plot)
- Some mistakes or artifacts can be seen here and there (me very new sorry)
- If the doujin has a last page that are alternates or sketches i wont translate them unless necessary
- Feel free to suggest any doujin's to translate, it might take some time maybe few hours or days but effort will definitely be put on

I believe you got her name wrong. If you look at the raw(https://e-hentai.org/g/2031594/f62e3f0267/) there's furigana by her name that reads "Midori"

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This is probably the tamest femdom from Yamahata Rian.

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Hi everyone, i have updated some of the pages with new name as well as fixed one spelling error
Best Regards,

Last edited on 28 February 2022, 13:20.

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thank you for TL

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>Some of the original meaning might get altered just a little bit (does not change the plot)
A lot of your mistakes do change the overall plot. I've given a sample below to help you improve.

I highly encourage you to check the below, especially if you're going to ask for money right off the get-go.

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Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

Fonts: check out Wild Words, CCVictory Speech, Spinner Rack BB for good "catch-all" fonts.

rough grammar (There are more mistakes than the ones I indicate below.)

every page: poor punctuation
p.2 Did I really promised => promise
p.2 you did said that => say
p.3 even if i did promised => promise
p.4 all of it => all of them (referring to clothes, plural)
p.4 looks like a child penis => it looks the penis of a child
p.5 forskin
p.7 her panties sure is => are
p.7 more pre-cum are starting => is
p.10 isn't this what you expect => expected (past tense)
p.11 its feel => it feels

rough translation (There are mistakes than the ones I indicate below.)

Page 2
Your TL: Her name is Midori, A junior in my high school.
JP Text: 俺は同じ高校の先輩の碧ちゃんと付き合っている
Author intent: I'm dating Midori-chan, a junior that goes to the same high school as me.

Page 2
Your TL: I"ve only been masturbating for 2 weeks.
JP Text: 2週間オナニー我慢したから
Author intent: This could be unclear without context, but he's been HOLDING BACK from masturbating for 2 weeks. This is confirmed later in the doujin (probably because that's what she ordered him to do.)

Page 3 (and more)
Your TL: Heki
JP Text: 碧ちゃん
Author intent: Her name is Midori.

Page 3
Your TL: Well, How do I say this hmm...
JP Text: そうですねえ・・・少しきつい言い方をしますけど
Author intent: Let's see here... It's going to sound a little harsh, but...

Page 3
Your TL: So I doubt you could even satisfy me.
JP text: だから私の事絶対気持ちよくできないと思うんです
Author intent: She's being VERY harsh here, and there's no white gloves in how she says it. " [So] I believe you'll absolutely not be able to satisfy me/make me feel good."

Page 6
Your TL: Please hold on as your first time is gonna be tough
JP text: オナ禁していたおちんちんにはつらないかもしれませんが我慢してくださいね
Author intent: No mentions of first time. "This may be pretty tough for your cock's that's been denied/prohibited from masturbating, but please do your best."

Page 6
Your TL: Hold it, don't cum yet!
JP text: わあっ我慢汁がすごいでてきた
Author intent: Whoa! There's so much pre-cum [that came out].

Page 5
Your TL: !!!
JP text: 寸止め・・・！？
Author intent: Text untranslated.

Page 5
Your TL: I'll thoroughly discipline you.
JP text: 徹底的に寸止めするって事です
Author intent: "[This means] I'm going to [always/thoroughly] stop right before [you cum]..." The whole idea of orgasm denial is lost here.

Page 5
Your TL: I won't let you cum so easily.
JP text: 扱くとはいいましたけど射精は簡単には出せませんよ
Author intent: Half the sentence is missing. "I did say I'd handle it it/take care of you, but I won't make it easy for you to cum/won't let you cum so easily."

Page 4
Your TL: This is my first time having sex with Heki.
JP text: セックスはできないけど2週間ぶりにやっと出せる
Author intent: Rewrite. "I can't have sex, but I'll finally be able to cum after 2 weeks." Her name isn't Heki.

Last edited on 28 February 2022, 20:35.

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Orgasm denial / Edging isn't really much of a punishment, when you do eventually cum it feels amazing, more so if its done by a different person like here.

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Oh my gawd, there was this new Yamahata Rian doujin around and I didn't knew for half a year...

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