A one shot published in Angel club 2018-04

This version is using mag scans.

The alt translation is using higher res tank scans: https://e-hentai.org/g/1928631/1ba4d4cafe/

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that page 6 to page 7 is the kind of development that should happen more

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i'd take better translation and typesetting over better image quality any day.
thanks for the hard work!

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This isn't a better translation lol. You definitely made unnecessary embellishments and rewrote some lines, on top of the terrible grammar and typos. It's clearly MTL.

Pg.16, "I'll quench your desire" or "quench my desire" lmao nobody talks like that. She just says, "please cure/fix/help/take care of me!".
Pg.20, None of the other students suspected Young Oedipus was fucking their teacher. They're basically just saying that they want to be alone with her, so they can teach her things (obviously about sex) and make her serve them.

Last edited on 27 February 2024, 06:47.

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