awesome, but it would be better if the mind control only restricted some actions rather than a complete rewrite

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The Most Vanilla Mind control Double Shot H Manga I've seen in a While. Mizutani is clearly a Tsundere and obviously LIKES Takefumi. When she's hypnotized by him, she's fulfilling her Desires and Fantasies. Why Else would she let him Knock her Up?;)

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Man, the grammar is really bad. Makes we wonder if the translation is even accurate at all.

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This is machine translate don't expect anything.

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Writing and grammar isn't good. Male is ugly as fuck. The woman isn't too pretty herself either. Pass.

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english is not my first language but I'd say the translation is quite understandable

anything is appreciated for me as long as its Jirou's work

I guess Muricans will die of stroke if they see 1 grammar wrong huh

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@mish2001. I Agree.

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"Maybe one day, she'll come to her senses and kill me." legit laughed out loud. what a way to end a story.

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The Most Vanilla Mind control Double Shot H Manga I've seen in a While. Mizutani is clearly a Tsundere and obviously LIKES Takefumi. When she's hypnotized by him, she's fulfilling her Desires and Fantasies. Why Else would she let him Knock her Up?;)

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At least when this uses the random application cliche, the character was looking for it, showing some self-awareness.

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The Most Vanilla Mind control Double Shot H Manga I've seen in a While. Mizutani is clearly a Tsundere and obviously LIKES Takefumi. When she's hypnotized by him, she's fulfilling her Desires and Fantasies. Why Else would she let him Knock her Up?;)

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@JackMorrison I agree bet she wanted this from the start

I wish Jirou makes a part 4 of this where she's less mind controlled. Would honestly preferred if this waa blackmail storyline instead

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ruined when he passed her around
what a cuck

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