This was my first time doing a translation and edits. Note I do not speak Japanese so i used a translator and made it flow better. I hope everyone likes it.

This is very good, the wording flows well and it all makes sense. Have you considered doing the artists other pokemon ones?

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Good work. I have a few suggestions, which I intend in the spirit of friendly advice. You're free to take them or leave them.

You used kind of a flowery font. Something simpler like Wild Words or Chinacat might be easier to read.

Also, you might look into text-outlining tools. I'm not sure which program you're using, but I know GIMP has an addon that can do it in one click. Really useful for transparent text bubbles or text directly on the image.

That said, this is far better than most first projects, and you can only improve.

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Best to use a more normal font, fancy comes at the expense of readable in this case.

And of course I'd recommend having a bit more confidence/experience in your understanding of the language. I don't agree with those that think people should build up years of experience without public feedback before they dare to release anything publicly, but I don't think blind trust in MTL is the way to go either.

Overall not bad given the circumstances, already ahead of how most people start off despite the language barrier being kind of a big deal.

Btw instead of just promising to do better next time, you could just as well show commitment by updating this gallery. Getting it perfect the first time is what we all hope for but polishing something up is still a lot better than procastinating improvements till the next upload.

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i though you use hard to read font to troll us on April fools ;v
If you pick better fonts everyone could have love it, the translation is good just need work on the type of font used

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sharp teeth is sex!

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