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http://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ068812.html

Pg12 check the centering on text. You probably used the Quick Selection tool and then forgot to center vertically. It saves trouble doing that but i found that getting used just feeling where the center is usually works better in the end. There are some other text bubbles that could use less strict centering than what you had. Bit of a shame that you didn't redraw the text on the third page but understandable. Thanks for translating.

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@nikgtasa
welp, missed that, sorry. Thanks for the heads up.
I do center the texts manually, so either I simply forgot or it got messed up when exporting (happens quite often).
Either way guess I really shouldn't do the final check while half asleep.

I did try redrawing at first, but the results weren't clean & consistent enough, so I ended up opting to disguise them as text boxes.

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pg 11 and pg 12 say the same sentence, "b-being seen naked is a bit..."

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我喜欢这种类型的本子

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That Piccolo and Goku relationship reference was great. Second DBZ reference in a doujin that I have seen tonight.

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