the storyline is simple yet sweet

original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2188934/775a715855/

unfortunately the dithering is pretty bad... why do people still use dithering?

What the fuck is p.16?

"I can't believe your licking you're mother's pussy..."

Why? just fucking why? with just 1 swap then it can be push as typo but double swap... can only be, you don't fucking know what's "your" what's "you're"

"your" is not the same as "you're"

"you're" is short of "you are"

"your dick" is not the same as "you are dick"

...i hope this is just trolling
LMAO

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uncleaned (or maybe untranslated, idk) text on page 29.

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Momma will love you even if you born without eyes.

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1. Part of the bubble is destroyed on page 2.
2.There's no space between "go" and "to" on page 7.
3. There's no space between "go" and "to" on page 8.
4. There's no space between "of" and "course" on page 34
5. Uncleaned speech bubble on page 13.
6. uncleaned text on page 29
7. Commas are missing in the sentence "Stupid, Stupid, Stupid!!!" on page 13
8. Incorrect use of "your" on page 16
9. Incorrect use of "you're" on page 16
10. Space in between "with" and out" when it should be "without" on page 25
I appreciate the work Inny, but there's some flubs in the work. Hope you can take the time to fix them.

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