1. You used the downsampled version of the images. Either download the archive, the non-downsized torrent, or click the image, scroll down, and click "download original."
2. Please punctuate.
3. Please proofread.
4. >I have no fucking idea what is happening in pages 8-10 sorry if it doesnt make sense, but i wasnt able to translate it properly
Not to put you down, but you're not at a level where you should be translating if you can't make sense of ENTIRE pages.

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Jesus fucking christ. An error right off the first damn word in the first damn page. Everything reads like you need a few more years of learning both languages.

I'm going for a full typo speedrun this time, no grammatical errors, no translation inaccuracy.

pg. 4
- Its
- Kagas
pg. 5
- Theres
- colorfulltrick
- Its
- moring
pg. 6
- commision
pg. 7
- Thats
- Its
- Im
pg. 9
- 1normally
- Its
- its
pg. 10
- thightly
- its
- dont
- dont
- its
pg. 11
- Thats
- wont
- didnt
pg. 13
- Its
pg. 14
- wont
pg. 15
- shes
pg. 16
- firs
pg. 19
- Its
pg. 20
- Thats
- Its
- dont
pg. 22
- Its
pg. 23
- its
- Its
pg. 24
- Im
- wont
pg. 25
- Its
pg. 26
- teams
- couldnt
- feelt
pg. 28
- Thats
pg. 29
- Its
- Im
pg. 30
- dont
- its
- Its
- allright
- lets
- Lets
- tommorow
pg. 33
- its
- im (yes, I'm gonna check your translation notes as well)
credit page
- doesnt
- wasnt
pg. 2
- Its
pg. 3
- usuall
- excercise

Keep in mind that I only did typos. Baffles me how people are rating shit like this 4.4. Even the translator himself said in the note that he did a shitty job and couldn't make sense of anything.
I don't even know if this is a MTL, a guesswork, a rewrite or whatever the fuck it may be.

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