Artist: Belu
Source: https://skeb.jp/@BeLu133/works/19
Commissioned by me.
I'm pretty dissatisfied with this. Belu only fulfilled half my commission. It seems to be done in a rush. Also find it strange where she didn't do the personality excretion, despite the fact its one of her fetishes.
She only had a a month and two weeks to do this. Maybe if she spent less time on Twitter, she would've done better.

Ouch, so you commissioned them to do personality excretion and she just couldn't be assed?

Personally, I've never been very fond of her art style in general but that would be a fucking scam coming from any artist......

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@Glovelove
Yeah. She straight up didn't do it. And personality excretion is her specialty, so it's weird she didn't. This cost a fucking pretty penny for her to fuck up like this.
And it couldn't be a translation issue, but I commissioned art from other doujin artists and they understood my directions perfectly fine.
She didn't follow half of my instructions. The art was supposed to be an extension of this commission. https://skeb.jp/@BeLu133/works/18
I also ordered bondage machines too and she still didn't follow it. I'm even more mad that she provided only 2 textless images. On 2 separate sites.
I hate Skeb, because they don't allow you to speak to the artist for finer details or discuss some issues. I most certainly have a bunch of unkind words to say to her, no matter how much I like her art.
So yeah, I am pretty butt hurt about this CG Art set, but at least it's fappable. But damn am I butt hurt.
Might be more fappable if someone translated it.

Last edited on 05 May 2022, 02:26.

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Past few years Belu's been doing things like this to his fully sold CG sets...

I loved her for making nice MC related works but honestly more I bought more I realized she only does things half-done and always writes 'to be continued' which she never finishes.
It's a shame really her drawing's gotten better but her attitude and acting unprofessional really kills herself as an artist.

Cheesing out same drawings for over doezen pages, not finishing her works, etc...
Thanks for sharing commission despite all downs of this work.

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@KingoftheHill
I agree. She really is unprofessional. From what I gather from her Tweets, she's a housewife. She has more than enough time than to give me 3 different artworks and 8 extremely simple variations.
And now that you mention it she does has some attitude problem now that I think about it.
One time in a previous commission, there were issues that she was willing to break the Skeb rules to talk to me about. In her text, she was rather rude sounding. I thought it was just the translation program she's using, but now I think different. It would explain why she doesn't get that many commissions.
I always thought her works that she didn't finish were by design. She seems for of a writer than an artist these days, but she isn't much of a writer.
Also, you're welcome. Happy to provide this to everyone.
I'm probably not going to send another commission to her. This wasn't worth the money.
I could've given this money to an artist like Hatchake Taro (of whom I somewhat befriended) or Kido Keiji. I could've sent 3 to 5 commissions to them than what I got from Belu.

Last edited on 05 May 2022, 02:29.

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@PsychoMinkbreaker

If it helps I'll put it on my translation to-do list (free of charge, even if I do decide to start working on commission in the future), not a huge fan of Belu but you deserve better. Also added the Nessa gallery you uploaded earlier this week to my to-do list, any combination of long gloves and hypnosis/corruption that includes costume changes is delightful.

Chances of getting around it soon are terrible though, I took a break from scanlating with the intention of getting better and being less reliant on dictionaries in the future but just ended up massively sidetracked with all sorts of things and getting a bit rusty instead. Now my to-do list has more than 500 galleries on it and growing every day as I continue to spend most of my time tagging and uploading.

I'll have this on high priority (not top though, I won't allow myself to upload any new scanlations before I finish my incomplete one first, and some of the na_shacho galleries I recently uploaded are on high priority as well because I know they should be relatively easy to re-translate for E-hentai) when I do manage to get back to translating properly, assuming my editor can figure out how to deal with the vertical text (from what I see there isn't a lot of horizontal empty space so text placement will be an absolute nightmare) but I do still hope for you that someone will beat me to it!

On a side note, you could polish up your titles a bit.
https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Renaming
There is no official naming convention for artist CGs but content like this generally defaults to the same naming convention used for Western/3d (or doujinshi without known convention) so would be "[Belu] The Story of Asuna and Suguha Being Brainwashed (Sword Art Online)" in this case

Last edited on 05 May 2022, 05:01.

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@Glovelove

Aww shit man. That's wonderful and real nice, but you don't have to do that. Sounds like you got a lot from your plate, but I really appreciate it.
Don't push yourself too hard to have this translated. You can take all the time you need. Thank you.

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Some other notes:

Not having the personality excretion might actually have a slight advantage here, I personally would have prefered if it was included but its one of those niches where I'd have a hard time convincing my typesetter/editor to touch it. (My 500+ gallery to do list is a bit blown out of proportion for the same reason.....there's definitely that much in there, this and the Nessa gallery mentioned are the 551 and 552nd galleries in there......but half of it has tags that I shouldn't expect Erseaselle to help with because their limits are pretty vanilla compared to my own degeneracy)

I've double checked if this shit is even allowed under the Skeb ToS and the "artist can do whatever the fuck they want as long as something is delivered, not our problem, we'll terminate your account if you argue against this" is so fucking blatant that I'm amazed anyone trusts them with their money.......an artist could literally just send you a photo of their middle finger in response to a request they didn't like and still take the full payment and Skeb would approve of the behaviour.

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Commissioning independent artists have always been hit or miss, and that is by design, I much rather have this system than the alternative which would end up with Skeb having the authoritative power to determine what is an acceptable product, you do not want a platform to butt in unless you want Patreon all over again.

Anyway, it seems like Belu gives her doujin far more effort than commissions, I bet he/she is overextending by taking in commissions.

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