I think you'd better stick to translating to Indonesian next time, or whatever your native language is. You've translated "Are you about to come?" to "Are you about to leave?".

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This looks like a really good doujin, it's a shame nobody has translated it into english.

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Page 15 should be page 17, click here for reference.

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Pg 3: "He'll get grossed out" instead of "She'll get grossed out"

I'm so impressed by your incompetence that you somehow fucked up who was speaking here.

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i fix'd

https://e-hentai.org/g/2223576/319824ab88/

Last edited on 17 May 2022, 22:20.

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Is that canan?

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