Lmao this is getting a lot of rage from many people

Actually I wasn't gonna upload this chapter after my last translation was received poorly, but seeing all the salty tears about the translation in the previous comments... I just couldn't help myself.
So, if you have a problem with this translation just petition it to remove it

In the mean time....keep crying about this one as well. I love reading all your angry comments. Its super entertaining to read someone getting angry about the "not 100% perfect" translation of a hentai.
Especially yours @ cutegyaru. You really put the "cute" in your name

Decent, thanks for the tl.

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You know what, I think I'm gonna dispel the idea, AGAIN, that MTL is good. For like the 100th time.

And you keep using the downsampled 1280x version of the images. And you left a bunch of SFX untranslated even though you clearly removed them. And you forget to redraw.

rough translation (random sample)

every page: All your moans are basically guesses, and most of them are wrong.

Page 1
Your TL: No... No... I wont!
JP text: 駄目・・・駄目・・・イったらいけない・・・！
Author intent: No... No... I musn't/can't cum...!

Page 1
Your TL: ...
JP text: 二話 「絶頂祈祷」
Author intent: UnTLd title of the chapter.

Page 4
Your TL: I just cant get over how good this feels!
JP text: 溶ける解けちゃうぅ
Author intent: Completely made up. "I'm melting! It's [the seal]/I'm breakiiiiing!" Kinda a play-on-word between 溶け and 解け, both pronounced the same.

Page 5
Your TL: this sensation haaaah!
JP text: とけちゃうのおおおおおっ
Author intent: I'm meltiiiiiiiing/breaking! [it's in kana, so both could work considering the play-on-word explained above.]

Page 4
Your TL: So in this fight...!
JP text: だからこれが私の戦い・・・！
Author intent: She's saying that this her "battle", i.e not a physical one, but a "sexual" one (because she's not strong enough, like Sieg, to actually fight.).

Page 9
Your TL: And use that knowledge to // use it to...
JP text: その力を正しく使い・・・ // 使い・・・
Author intent: Not knowledge. Also, omitted 正しく. "And use that power wisely to... // use it to..."

Page 7
Your TL: Even if it's unbearable, I have to buy them more time to rescue me.
JP text: 耐えきれないならせめて時間を・・・！
Author intent: なら doesn't mean "even if' here, but "if... then". "If I can't endure [this pleasure], then I can/should at least buy them some time...!" Also not sure where the whole "to rescue me" part comes from.

Page 6
Your TL: Slurp
JP text: ビクク
Author intent: Quiver/shake/tremble/twitch

Page 7
Your TL: Prayer... please...
JP text: お・・・ // お願いします・・・
Author intent: P... // please...

Page 7
Your TL: Thankyou
JP text: ふむ 良かろう
Author intent: Wrong speaker, wrong TL. "Hmph, very well."

Last edited on 22 May 2022, 21:05.

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@cutegyaru

Wow! I love this guy. He even wants the moans to be translated properly. I think you might be spending way too much time on hentai. Go and touch some grass please for your sake

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@Jimmycrack
>Wow! Someone wants an accurate translation!
>Haha! That's so silly! Everyone should be just as fucking lazy as me!

Nice projection.

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Also by all means if you want don't want this on the website tell the mods to remove it. I have to get back to college anyways and I honestly couldn't care less about this.

So you are welcome to keep indulging in your self-perceived superiority over knowing the japanese moaning sounds all you want mate

See ya folks!

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Thanks for the translation, just a little bit of advice to avoid unecessary and salty comments in the future : if you use machine translation, that's perfectly fine, you just don't have to say it. I'm getting tired of all these comments bitching about machine translation, all this pointless nitpicking over some freaking porn, when they wouldn't even know it was machine translated if it wasn't specified by the updater in the first place ! If your level of japanese is good enough to figure out this piece was machine translated, then it's actually good enough to read the original japanese text, wich will (pretty much) always be superior to a translation, be it mtl or professional. If you're fluent in japanese and are not happy with someone's translation, even more so an amateur's work, you're welcome to either translate it yourself or STFU, read in the original text and leave everyone else in peace !

Rant over

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@ArchaneanCamus
>when they wouldn't even know it was machine translated if it wasn't specified

Oh, you're hilarious if you think I wouldn't fucking notice. Take a look at most galleries tagged with "rough translation." Now, I don't have the time or energy to flag all of them, so I pick my fights.

I asked him to put it in the title to give extra info to the reader, but people like you spreading the false idea that "MTL is fine" need to fuck off and are the sole reason I'm even commenting here. Just because YOU have abysmal standards doesn't mean the rest of the users also do.

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@ ArchaneanCamus

Bu....but how can he feel better about himself when knowing japanese and getting angry on hentai websites are the only skills he has in life.

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@Jimmycrack
And what does that say about you — the one who got so angry at legitimate criticism that you intentionally published yet another low quality release? They provide you help to improve but instead you decide to spend (minimal) effort making the same old mistakes? A little self-reflection goes a long way.

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edit: I'm done replying after this. I feel like I've been arguing the same thing ad nauseam. tl;dr: just learn JP and basic editing. I ask for nothing more.

@kavinh
Damn, you're so wrong I feel like I actually need to respond to you.

>loves gate keeping translations
I didn't know understanding the languages you translate TO and FROM equaled "gatekeeping." Seems like a pretty fucking bare minimum to me.

>copypasting resources
Yes, I do provide editing resources. Would you rather have nobody ever provide resources to newcomers? Maybe you'd rather have me write unsubstantiated rants like yours instead?

>then calling in losers from his discord to brigade vote it up lol
Why yes, my secret hate Discord is raring to go. Just need to call them up and bring down the downvote hammer. Why else would anyone downvote comments? This HAS to be the only explanation.

>on harassment pretending it's criticism
How am I pretending that it's criticism? I literally provide the mistake, a suggested correction, and an explanation. Nobody likes getting criticized, I get it. But you acting like I'm amusing myself "harassing" the oh-so-poor scammers and shameless MTLers shitting up this site by pointing out how their TLs are wrong or have poor grammar is just funny.

>Most people don't have 7 QC editors
A decent chunk of my projects are done solo. Also, what's wrong with having help? Maybe... that's a good thing?

>take paid commissions
I haven't taken commissions in a very long time, minus the odd one here and there. I TL for fun.

>still at over 4 stars
99% of galleries on EH have over 4 stars. The rating system is worthless and never represents the quality of the TL.

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@cutegyaru

>"you acting like I'm amusing myself "harassing""

ya i'm sure you don't enjoy it lol you're doing it out the kindness of your heart by insulting people for their good.
Ya i'm sure it's not gatekeeping either commenting saying you're absolute dogshit trash don't translate ever again!!! but here's some helpful links xxxxx

>poor scammers and shameless MTLers
wow so everyone you target deserved being called absolute shit, i don't mind you calling out the scammers and commission trolls, but clearly it ain't just that.

>still at over 4 stars
>The rating system is worthless and never represents the quality of the TL.
You literally said "Just because YOU have abysmal standards doesn't mean the rest of the users also do."
so are you and ur discord the entire userbase then? in which case ya sure go ahead.

>Just need to call them up and bring down the downvote hammer.
Ya it's called a dogpile funny how they use YOU as the battering ram ain't it. its almost like negativity follows you.

idk man maybe I got the vibes wrong but u seem like a bit of a prick. well this is gonna get downvoted anyways so idc.

edit: since he editted
>"Maybe you'd rather have me write unsubstantiated rants like yours instead?"
>coming from a guy who goes into random galleries calling people absolute shit stop translating and thinks it's constructive criticism

Would you like me to start insulting you saying ur absolute shit then link you links on how to stop being a narcissist abusive POS? it's frankly pathetic how you think you're doing anything helpful by being an abusive POS and pretending you care about anything but ur ego.

Last edited on 23 May 2022, 01:14.

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GET A FUCKING LIFE AND STFU

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Question but what program do you use to get the text?

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I have no problem with MTL as a whole, if it is done well enough and on old works. If the work is unlikely to ever get a true translation, MTL is acceptable. This work isn't old enough and the artist has enough translations that the likely hood of translation is high enough that MTL should be avoided. I have MTLed one work years ago but I made sure to pick something that was unlikely to be ever translated. If you want to MTL, pick something no one else will ever translate otherwise you will just attract hate.

Overall the translation is so so, not bad enough that is unreadable but not good enough that I can't find problems without looking for them.

The image editing is average at best. Picking different fonts was a plus but the white outing of text in some of the pages was distracting. I'm aware those types of edits are hard to cover up. When I decided what I was going to MTL I avoided hentai with those types of pages because I didn't want to mess with touching them up.

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@imocla

1 person is responsible for the "hate" for the majority of galleries of mtls i've rarely ever seen anyone else post about it besides him, and it's not because a work is new it's because the guy is a toxic asshole and is known for it. He likes coming in acting like an arse insulting people then pretending it was just for criticism not the first time won't be the last and his disgusting support group pander to it.

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I'd rather have mtl than no translation at all so thanks.

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And to think we used to have Darknight translating this series, went from the all time best, to the fucking dumpster.

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So the low score is because of behind the scenes "drama"? Honestly the translation is coherent and if people think meaning is lost because of how it's done, when this is free; isn't the solution easy?
Translate it yourself if you hate it so bad? If the quality is bad when the availability level is "free" how about do it yourself? Lol

If the translation was incoherent I could understand being upset but compared to the utter shit I've seen with forced accents and illegible translations this isn't anything worth complaining about, lol

I don't get how you get so entitled over free porn you can't just say "Thank you" or "I'll do it myself!" XD

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Coom brain has fucked up so much of you niggas perceptions. I've never seen the "It's free so it's fine if it's shit" mentality outside of porn because of it. FYI if you wanna read an MTL you can install literal chrome extensions for it. I come to this site to read tl's that convey the author's intent as best as possible. Unfortunately that's hard af now because retards will literally take anything these days.

@kavinh Why are you so hooked on the free aspect? Should I suck off this man's dick because he put this up? With your attitude you'd take all of the watermarked and shit quality scans on this site as praiseworthy. Get some standards bro.

Last edited on 23 May 2022, 04:08.

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@terrorkingMugen

hardly even drama it's 1 pretentious prick with a discord who wants to police scanlations coming in saying "you suck this is shit stop translating learn jp read this this and this" and pretending he's doing it out of goodwill to save the scene.

@spaceghost47
REEEEE i don't like the free translation HOW DARE IT EXIST. God so pathetic. i'd understand if it illegible but it isn't. but hey assholes will complain about everything nowadays won't you.

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@TerrorKingMugen
If I was given a dollar every time I read the exact same arguments you posted, I'd be rich.

>Honestly the translation is coherent
You and so many others confuse ACCURACY and READABILITY. Let me give you a very exaggerated example:

JP: 花が好き
TL: I'm gonna fuck your mom's pussy tonight, TerrorKingMugen.

See, the "translation" is coherent and reads very well. Is it ACCURATE? Hell the fuck no. While MTL doesn't do egregious rewrites like this all the time, it unfortunately still sucks. It will, without hesitation, completely omit parts it can't parse, fail to understand context (and JP is very contextual), it will forego characters voices, literary devices, confuse words and expressions, and just straight up break down if it doesn't understand the input at all.

> entitled over free porn
Nobody fucking cares about it being "free." I can shit down your throat for free too. You're hungry? Just open up. The point is expecting a minimum standard of decency, here being understanding (at least well enough) Japanese.

>do it yourself
God, shut the fuck up. Plenty of translators already do that. It's impossible to re-do everything, hence the idea of having something decent on the first go.

@kavinh
Jesus, go whine elsewhere you troglodyte. If you don't like me refusing to suck MTLer dick, then that's your fucking problem. You wouldn't be able to tell a good translation from a bad one even if it hit you in the face. You're literally worthless in this entire "argument."

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@cutegyaru
So what happened to no more replies lol.
Oh no it's you refusing to suck mtler dick to not phrase stuff as FU YOU SUCK GTFO STOP TRANSLATING, it's all constructive criticism lol. You're fcking psychotic narcissist why the f should anyone give a damn what you think when you pretend that's unironically good criticism geez what a pathetic fragile ego you have

Last edited on 23 May 2022, 05:16.

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@kavinh
I did say no more replies, but the takes here are so fucking stupid I can't help myself. However, talking to you is burning my brain cells very quick, so I think I might actually stop. For my own sanity.

>FU YOU SUCK GTFO STOP TRANSLATING
You keep saying that. Please, point out exactly when and where I said "GTFO STOP FUCKING TRANSLATING." I provide criticism. I'm not nice about it, and I've readily admitted that myself many times. But don't try fucking act like I don't want new translators. I want new translators that care and want to improve. I care about quality, which is something you clearly don't and probably never will. You can't even bother to write a half-coherent rant without using an ad hominem every 5 words.

>You're fcking psychotic narcissist
Dude, I don't think you understand half the words you're using. You sound unhinged as hell. This entire conversation doesn't even concern you anyway, which is why I'm increasingly confused as to why you're even engaging me.

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@cutegyaru maybe he's the commissioner for this dumpster fire that's why kavinh is so invested on this?

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@cutegyaru
Coming from the guy who says you shouldn't translate followed by insults every time i see you giving "criticism" in a damn comment section.
"i'm not nice about it" is putting it lightly, but i guess i shouldn't expect much from someone who talk like a shitposter then pretends its criticism
> I want new translators that care and want to improve
ya you just tell them to fck off stop translating learn jp then link some "helpful" links after that. That's real good criticism isn't it, not insulting humiliating demotivating or unproductive at all, you have fcking great social skills

Dw you don't have to i'll stop replying since you can't. also if you wait a day or so your fans will prob have the comments against you downvoted to hidden so you won't have to either.

@PsychicDoom
I'm poor how the f would i commission a translation to begin with let alone for one i hardly like. The guy's just an annoying prick and i wanted to vent

@spaceghost47
gonna need a source on that, only braindead guy i see here is you, But i guess screaming about a translation you don't like on a website where you can block uploaders is too hard. Then again what do i expect from someone who just calls everyone retarded. You probably unironically think insulting someone is criticism lol.stop being stupid.

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lol kavinh gotta be trolling at this point
no one is this autistic and retarded

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Wow, op just basically admitted "hello guys, fuck you, I'm a dipshit"

Btw, why can't I see some comments here ? It's not even saying there are hidden comments here

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"I BECAME A KNIGHT TO PROTECT HER BUT INSTEAD WE'RE ALL JUST LOOKING AT HER AND DOING NOTHING AND THE DEMON KING WILL BE RELEASED BY CUM AND ALL THE WOMEN HAVE BEEN GETTING IMPREGNATED BY ORCS FOR THE PAST YEAR WOW"

Really?

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Isn't there a spell on them or something ?

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