Hello everyone !
Here is the second comic of 2022 with certainly a little delay ^^"

It's also the second comic that I'm doing with DAZ3D, I hope you like it.

This is the story of 3 young men who, during an evening a little too alcoholic, will participate in this program which takes place once a month called "Solidarity Raffle".

A bit like the Swap Raffle in a way except that here people make available parts of their bodies that are difficult to sell on the market or to avoid paperwork.

Good reading !
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Thank you for your work. The quality of your work is very high and very good, but your story is not attractive at all and the transformation of a part of the body is not very good. The story of the previous series was more interesting than this series. It spoils and make the gentleman look like a man and the woman look like a woman

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The transformations are great, the translation is improving although as usual you forgot some pages and some speach bubbles that are still in French, the weird focus on pee in every single comic weirded me out but I'm not here to kink shame.

Other than that what bothers me is that every single comic posted recently is left on a cliffhanger where it can be answered by a second part but it doesn't, so I don't understand the "Story arc" tag when it's a standalone comic, but like previous parts the ending is just so rushed, for example:

The guy catches his long term girlfriend cheating on him on his own bed, and within ONE panel he's completly fine with it, accepting it and even joining in the threesome despite not even showing interest in men or the least bit of doubt.

The other guy loses his job and RIGHT AWAY within one panel again goes "I'm gonna do porn now" like that's a normal progression of events, a normal person would have to hit rock bottom before heading that direction, and also just cutting off and even forgetting that the guy is pregnant so we got no conclusion on what happened to the kid.

And the third guy was written normally, if this was a story about the third guy becoming trans, finding love and being happy with his new life, it would've been great, he had a good story progression and a good build to his ending.

Overall, what needs work since the translation is improving is the story, the endings have always been so rushed and the story never reach a satisfying end, they're left on a cliffhanger thinking there's gonna be a second part to finish it up, but it never comes.

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@Sieght based on @Amel1995's comment, how do you prefer people give you feedback on language fixes?

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@multiformbeing
Hi ! You can give me some advice via email, I think my inbox on EH is full...

@Amel1995
I think the ends of my comics recently are "rushed" because I tried to make One Shots, before I made 2 or 3 chapters for one story, and people didn't like it because they needed to read the other chapters before. So I started to create One Shot...
Maybe I created too much character, maybe just focus on one character in a One Shot will be better for the storytelling.
And also, maybe in the future, remake some comics with multiple chapters to get more room for character improvement.

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@Sieght Focusing on developing 1 character is honestly better than putting multiple ones with rushed endings, I like to have more characters myself, but if their stories aren't gonna reach a satisfying ending, I'd rather have 1 person with a good story than 3 with half a story.

Although I disagree that having multiple chapters is a bad thing, having one offs ultimatlly just hurts you as a creator because with nothing to hook people to stay for a new chapter people won't stay to see where a story goes, but I guess people these days have the attention span of a goldfish and can't keep up with story anyway so they'd rather have a short forgettable story rather than a deep thought out comic that they remember

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