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Good translation but just blurring the JP text is very distracting. Use content aware fill in Photoshop, or if you don't have that, even just covering it with white is preferrable imo.

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Save girl from short dick huh, look like porn scams website I found back then.

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>accepts commissions
>can't do basic things

1. You're still using the downsampled version of your images, sitting at 1280x. Pretty sure I already explained how to use the ORIGINAL resolution in your other uploads.
2. You don't redraw. At all. See guide below. This is beyond lazy.
3. Your TLs are full of typos and overall awful English. In fact, I'm tagging this as rough grammar. Justification below.
4. You don't punctuate.

rough grammar (WAAAAAAY more mistakes than what I'm pointing out below.)

p.2 2nd years in college => 2nd year
p.2 you've to say it => you can't use "you've" as a contraction of "you have" this way. either "you've got to..." or just "you have to"
p.2 he has a short dick => short refers to height, not size. small dick.
p.3 its over there => it's
p.3 the guy with short dick who dating => rephrase all of this.
p.3 let's take a look at those things, you just made it, right? => you refer to something as plural, then refer to the plural as singular.
p.4 it was immediately cum => it came [...]
p.4 so boyfriend-kun's dick is premature ejaculator on top of being short => another sentence with poor phrasing. "so, your BF is a premature ejaculator [...], huh? "
p.5 half-erected => half-erect
p.6 a blowjob for short dick => either add "a" or pluralize it.
p.6 open wide your mouth => open wide or open your mouth wide

editing guides:

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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Don't let Short Dick happen to you.

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based. small dicked men deserve nothing

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unregistered short dick is a crime. would you lie to your girl about short dick? register today

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Should have thought about that before choosing to be born with a short dick! Fucking loser

Should have thought about that before choosing to be born with a short dick! Fucking loser

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@Cutegyaru It does look like based on their other uploads they do know how to Redraw/basic editing. Unless they have someone else doing it for those ones (Which would mean not crediting someone else's work)

Probably due to the page count they chose to be lazy on this specific work (But that is admittedly speculation). I'd argue this is worse because it means the poor editing and blurring out text is done purposefully rather than just not learning how.

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@Virus465
Other uploads used pre-cleaned images provided by the artist. Check the RAWs.

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@Cutegyaru Oh yeah, didn't check the raw lol. Dumb assumption on my part that all the sources would be similar since it was the same artist.

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Why is it virgin Japanese men write this shit? It just screams "I've never been with a woman and I've watched too much porn" :/

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grammar may be shit but this gets a 5 just for the title lol!

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Big Dick actually scare girls away and can make sex very painful for them. Its hentai logic that big dick is the best. Generally average sized is the best.

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