Apparently English is now the hardest language on the planet with how many galleries I go around tagging. This is borderline gibberish.

rough grammar (there are WAAAAAY more mistakes than what I flag below)

every page: random, awful punctuation
p.2 No I've nothing special about => honestly no idea what this means
p.2 there is no way I, myself, am not enjoy my lessons => enjoying. rest of the sentence also very awkward
p.3 i'm not good at math's proof problems => math's proof? you mean proofing? again, kinda nonsensical
p.4 ara your boddy been shaking => has been
p.4 c'mon, what are your hip sitting down for? => ...what?
p.5 your cock got suddenly dragged out => pulled out
p.5 scurb
p.5 girls younger than you is messing => are
p.5 your glan => glans
p.5 your first juice shoot in a month come out like this => man, I can't even anymore.
p.5 it's okay even if it come out => comes

Last edited on 26 March 2022, 08:28.

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Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1812290/f04e03abb1/ starting on p. 116

Thanks. Have someone proofread your work, please. That can help a lot!

Also, iirc Fakku has a translation for this chapter

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Fuck, I just do not see how people get off to dick delving, ball pulverizing, and double anal, but to each their own.

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For how petite those two bitches are, they have some saggy tits.

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Some grammar/spelling issues:

[p4]
"Your body been shaking [...]" -> "[...] has been shaking [...]"
"Does it feels good [...]" -> "[...] feel [...]"
"C'mon, what are your hip sitting down for?" -> ??? (should be "hips" to match "are")
"Pushing it out more" -> ??? (that's not a sentence)

[p5]
"[...] have your glans and rod stroke [...]" -> "[...] stroked [...]"

[p6]
"Papa have been calling [...]" -> "[...] has been calling [...]"
"[...] won't be back until night" -> doesn't sound right to me, maybe "until tonight" or "before nightfall"?

[p8]
"I will sent [...]" -> "[...] send [...]"
"I'm also wore [...] like promised [...]" -> "I also wore [...] like I promised [...]"

[p10]
"[...] rotating at high-speed [...]" -> "[...] at high speed [...]"
"I wonder how you [...] feels [...] being dig out" -> "[...] feel [...] being dug out"
"[...] I blowed [...]" -> "[...] blew [...]"

[p11]
"[...] such pathetic pervert [...]" -> "[...] such a pathetic pervert [...]"

[p12]
"[...] testicles getting kicked [...]" -> "[...] testicles are getting kicked [...]"
"[...] your testicles is [...]" -> "[...] your testicles are [...]"
"[...] this pig just cum [...]" -> "[...] just came [...]"

[p13]
"[...] your prostate preessed" -> "[...] pressed"
"He been having a lot of dry orgasm [...]" -> "He has been having [...] orgasms [...]"

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Rough grammar:
p5: first juice shoot -> first juice shot
p7: what that sound -> what was that sound
p9: sprewdriver -> screwdriver
p10: I wonder how you masochist pig -> I wonder how a masochistic pig like you
p10: with just my -> from just having my
p10: thing is it? -> thing was it?
p11: his a promise with -> his promise to
p11: family's jewels -> family jewels
p12: isn't it? -> is it?
p14: we double fingering -> both finger
p14: all side -> both sides

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Oh hey it's the same girl from Private Lessons. Neat.

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