PICS TAKEN FROM: https://hentai4lifefull.blogspot.com/2021/12/hentai-naruto-hinata-is-your-wife-pov.html

"POV" is used veeeeeeeeeery loosely

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just OOC Bullshit

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In case anyone is thinking of redoing this, here are a few suggestions they may want to use:

P2
"When I returned from work and tried to change my clothes", not "when I returnr from work and try to change my clothes".

P4
"Did my wife accumulate a lot", not "Did my wife accumulated a lot".

P5
"The aggressiveness of my wife", not "the aggressive of my wife".
"I want to live together"? They're supposed to be man and wife. Perhaps it should be "I want to cum together".

Also, the font colors on Page 2 make it practically unreadable. It might be better to change them.

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tried of going to the blogspot, only to have to dm some guy for the full thing. either post everything or nothing at all.

such a shame too, the art is nice. but it aint worth possibly getting hacked over

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Some grammar/spelling issues:

[p2]
"retunr" -> "return"
"tommorow" -> "tomorrow"
"abscence" -> "absence"
"togheter" -> "together"
"tommorow" -> "tomorrow" (again)

[p4]
"Did my wife accumulated" -> "accumulate"

[p5]
"the aggressive of my wife" -> missing a noun (or change to "aggression"?)
"so good it seems to be alive, you" -> not sure what this is supposed to mean

[p6]
"My wife is out of breath, but she was happy and she was smiling" -> tense mismatch; either use present tense everywhere ("is") or past tense ("was")

[p7]
"She still had my cock inside her pussy if I pull it out slowly, ..." -> missing punctuation (period, semicolon, etc) after "pussy"
"the sperm will overflow from pussy" -> "her pussy" (and maybe no "from")
"I've been thinking at you" -> "about you"

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Is hentaiforlife2 the actual artist? Or the domain where you got these from.

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RE: tag 'full color'

> Does not apply to CG sets (whether they are western or not), imagesets, or 3D galleries

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/full_color

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