My second project of me getting into "decensoring" stuff lately
if you want to keep up with me doing that and other works come visit me on my server
https://discord.gg/8g4WSBdHuG

If you want to support me, thank you I will greatly appreciate it
https://www.patreon.com/coomerman

Get a proofreader. Also, stop trying to mimic Japanese grammatical structures, expressions, phrases, and words 1:1. Your TL is EXTREMELY stilted.

rough grammar (just a sample. there's more than 10 mistakes)

every page: please look up how to use commas and periods.

p.5 able for consultation => available
p.6 let's us => let us
p.7 put yourselves on my shoes => in
p.7 they put on one => in one
p.8 we all deserves => deserve
p.9 Ganko-sensei body => Ganko-sensei's body
p.10 while we are in class... // my dick got rock hard => stay consistent with your tenses.
p.13 [...] applying pressure in his crotch => on
p.14 let him breath => breathe
p.15 that pose and expression is tenser than usual... => are tenser

Base +16, Marien +25, as102 +12, Maxizin +6, MSTallgeese -11, cybeast93 +15, errata +12, Jouven +8, Porokichin66 +9, AntiShisno +8

don't give up your day job

Base +7, Chainjailhunter +6

if you're going to ruin someone else's work with unfunny meme garbage, at least put it at the end instead of p2

Base +7, MSTallgeese +11, darthnater9810 +6

RAW: e-hentai.org/g/1642359/b71daf1255/

p.s can you at least have the common courtesy of putting raw link next time if able.

Base +5, darkwing42 +47

Though it is rough, I thank you. Keep at it.

Base +6, exia45 +6

The three stooges with Kaiji reference is real gold.

Base +8, maguoshan +6