tentical -> tentacle
tenticales -> tentacles
enima -> enema
also a fair few missing appostrophes in the contractions (can't, that's, etc.) though that's less distracting.

Base +6, Baladesh +6, xeukytb +6, xyzdragon +8, noname31 +6, Ryuujinou +5, Gorm +7, Aoitan +6

It's interesting that this series gets English translations, but the more recent ones are downright bad (machine translations, grammatical and spelling errors, etc.). Guess no one is willing to pay for a quality translation of this series. The artist is still continuing them in the future.

Base +22, bigscuba +8, Shaddolk +8, Baladesh +6, xeukytb +6, IS IRIS +6, Dememori +6, cynamonbunz +38, Floofywafflinator +6, Korgal +6, noname31 +6, daitengu +8, Ryuujinou +5, and 6 more...

Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/1221725/b7f8d93254/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/1457607/4c07218acb/
Part 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/1457608/b4c25488b1/
Part 4: https://e-hentai.org/g/1584475/3b89b98525/
Part 5: https://e-hentai.org/g/1780617/35d744f62e/ Alt: https://e-hentai.org/g/1782844/d11b189aa8/
Part 6: https://e-hentai.org/g/1846952/daccdc2b38/
Part 7: https://e-hentai.org/g/2193622/d79b339149/ Alt: https://e-hentai.org/g/2283580/f2d98b98ac/
Part 8: https://e-hentai.org/g/2263288/c84514ea36/ (you are here)
Part 9: https://e-hentai.org/g/2282054/38edf19e08/

Base +6, Deadly_Kitten +6

Okay, this one is just BRILIANT!!!

Base +8, noname31 +6