First part: https://e-hentai.org/g/1498959/0afd4cced7/

Original Version: https://e-hentai.org/g/1940718/93358de372/

Finally got done with episode 2 of the Doujinshi, my translation still needs some work so advice is always welcome.

1. You're wasting your time with MTL and then doing guesswork because 90% of the output is utter nonsense (or plain wrong, but you wouldn't notice because you can't compare to the RAW). Learn Japanese (or Korean, in this case) instead.
2. Stop using Manga Temple. It's not a pretty font. Basic starter fonts you can check out include Wild Words, CC Victory Speech, or Spinner Rack BB.
3. Proofread. Decent amount of typos in there.

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There are some translation errors here and there, but overall its a good translation.

Last edited on 31 July 2022, 07:04.

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Thanks for the Information, MTL is not reliable but unfortunately also the best I got, using context clues and some polishing turns it at least in a readable but not 100% accurate translation.

I'm not gonna be able to become fluent in Korean or Japanese anytime soon, thats also why I am sticking to older stuff or uploads where I think its unlikely that they are going to get picked up for translation otherwise. With the reason that my work is not gonna be the best but its still better than no translation at all.

Also thanks for the font recommendation, I am going to switch to those for the future and also write the first text draft in Word or something to pick up on my typos. ^^

But honestly, I am much better in cleaning up images and scrubbing text than translating. So I am gonna do that part and then look for help for help with translation, or just doing a rough translation myself and let someone look over it who actually knows what they are doing so they can tell my where I missed information or interpreted something wrong.

Thanks for taking the time to give me some feedback or for offering help, it helps me in getting better at all that translation stuff.

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Hey, I've sent you a message through e-hentai forum if you want to read it.
At least this translation is readable. Nice to see Era Translations.

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