English version of [ジャックとニコルソン (のりパチ)] JK授乳催眠部。
Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1513552/05323cfbaf/

Did you MTL this?

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@cybeast93 No

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It's so great to see this one finally translated. I will read it later once a non-1280x torrent is available.

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There are a lot of really obvious grammar issues in this.

Please have someone proofread (a native English speaker) your work before posting.

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I’ve never seen such a dogshit translation with such good typesetting. This is unreadable.

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This translation's seriously illed

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You may understand japanese but your english is stilted as fuck.
@cybeast93
Pot calling the kettle black, you and Rabu2 have butchered Noripachi's work these past few weeks with your stiff ass ESL translations...

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If you have it, please upload the cleaned version.

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Can't say I've ever heard that "old saying" on pg 6 before.

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Every gallery I've bothered to check coming out of you has a mixture of horrible English and TL mistakes. It's kinda jarring how you keep pumping these out without really trying to improve, especially now that you do heavy-hitters like noripachi.

edit: @cybeast93 @Look A Moth

Let's not exaggerate here. These cases aren't even comparable. Big difference between having to work on phrasing and whatever this... is.

Last edited on 09 July 2022, 19:43.

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@Look a Moth, I'm glad I made that post! Thanks for the feedback. I promise I won't touch NoriPachi's works from now on. For the time being, I'll do additional passes, tweak things, do more research, and make my writing tighter.

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Rough grammar
p2 enter the society -> entering society
be wrinkled in any time -> won't ever be wrinkled
p3 you've been late for 10 times this month -> you've been late 10 times this month
illed -> ill
this the three -> that three
30 female students get pregnant -> 30 pregnant students.
report shows -> reports show
p4 wll -> will
have question -> have questions
may be you -> maybe you
prefect committee -> prefect committee president
p5 being mothers -> being a mother
the womb -> my womb
testes're -> testicles

That's not mentioning phrasing or anything else that's already been said.

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Damn this was hard to read. The bad translation is actually a distraction

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