RAW:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2244067/1f7cfe9e38/
ARTIST'S SHIT:
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ395724.html
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_233129
https://moriwatosu.booth.pm/items/3921452
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=1511663
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/37774114
https://twitter.com/watosu_mama
https://www.fanbox.cc/@e1jeyvox
I TOOK CARE OF THE EDITING AND TYPESETTING. SORRY IF IT'S ASS.
I BELIEVE A SILLY AFTERWORD PAGE IS OF THE ESSENCE.
PLEASE, TELL ME IF YOU THOUGHT IT WAS SHIT OR NOT. I APPRECIATE ANY COMMENTS.

I've seen worse editing from people begging for money. Still, guides below. Also encourage you to take a look at the typesetting guide.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

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Seriously thought ? First page you translate and you say "isn't you" ? You seriously should proofread

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>artist's shit
Made me chuckle lol.

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Baobhan more like Boobahn

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great titties

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It's better than anything anyone offering advice can do.

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