Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2233882/efe86e4053/

commisioned by : Jack

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I am accepting manga translation commissions starting at $0.75 depending on the amount of text.

I accept any genre except guro, scat and hard yaoi (i can still accept it if trap with cute art)

you can contact me from this following account
Email: aishi21moe@gmail.com
Discord: Aishi21#9569
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pg. 1: Isn't my panties is totally visible? > Aren't my panties totally visible?
pg. 2: plese > please
pg. 7:it's...a male genital > it's...a male's genitals
pg. 9: i kept coming... > I keep cumming...
pg. 11: it flow out inside me > it's flowing out inside me (it's not past tense)
pg. 13: let's start by reviewing previous treatment... > let's start by reviewing the previous treatment, or, let's start by reviewing your previous treatment
pg. 15: your nipples also enjoying it > your nipples are also enjoying it
pg. 15: your body is already looking forward for the treatment > your body is already looking forward to the treatment
pg. 17: let's pretend to be my wife and have some fun > let's pretend you're my wife and have some fun
pg. 19: your pussy tightens when you said that... > your pussy tightened when you said that...
pg. 21: i will bred > i will be bred (bred? c'mon man...)
pg. 23: so this is...what a real couple do... > so this is...what a real couple does...
pg. 24: commision > commission

the English is pretty poor, especially when it comes to basic punctuation and grammar, but i think the translation is pretty accurate so maybe next time just get someone to proofread your translations for you and i reckon you'll be golden
good luck man

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thanks to Mr_Person

pg. 1: Isn't my panties is totally visible? > Aren't my panties totally visible?
pg. 2: plese > please
pg. 7:it's...a male genital > it's...a male's genitals
pg. 9: i kept coming... > I keep cumming...
pg. 11: it flow out inside me > it's flowing out inside me (it's not past tense)
pg. 13: let's start by reviewing previous treatment... > let's start by reviewing the previous treatment, or, let's start by reviewing your previous treatment
pg. 15: your nipples also enjoying it > your nipples are also enjoying it
pg. 15: your body is already looking forward for the treatment > your body is already looking forward to the treatment
pg. 17: let's pretend to be my wife and have some fun > let's pretend you're my wife and have some fun
pg. 19: your pussy tightens when you said that... > your pussy tightened when you said that...
pg. 21: i will bred > i will be bred (bred? c'mon man...)
pg. 23: so this is...what a real couple do... > so this is...what a real couple does...

Last edited on 17 July 2022, 16:21.

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someone paid for this lol

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