One of the older works that hasn't been translated for a long time now. Though, sorry that I only translated Naburu Tanaka part.

I'm kind of sad that years ago Naburu stopped doing doujins and moved on to completely being a magazine-based artist. It would've been cool to see his takes on recent animes.

Base +6, as102 +12, ugge123 +11, swordpaladin +8

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/30471/4363c3d4c4/

pg. 2: because you're the only one who didn't hand your assignment! > because you're the only one who didn't hand in your assignment!
pg. 2: Oh you're saying something about my glasses? Or head? > Oh, did you say something about my glasses? Or were you talking about my head?
pg. 3: please be quiet during a class > please be quiet during class
pg. 4: you've been making troubles and being a nuisance to everyone else > you've been making trouble and being a nuisance to everyone else
pg. 5: it is done through the insertion of penis into the vagina > it is done through the insertion of the penis into the vagina
pg. 5: Oh, that's so? > Oh, is that so?
pg. 12: did she get all excited from having a deepthroat? > did she get all excited from getting deepthroated
pg. 14: did you boys understand about sex now? > do you boys understand sex now?
pg. 14: you guys have been paying attention on louise's womb, right? > you guys have been paying attention to louise's womb, right?
pg. 17: let's take turn > let's take turns
pg. 20: looks like everyone here already get the basic of sex and birth > looks like everyone here already gets the basics of sex and birth, or, looks like everyone here has gotten the basics of sex and birth

Base +12, laptopsuc +7, ugge123 +11

tagging. thanks to Mr_Person

pg. 2: because you're the only one who didn't hand your assignment! > because you're the only one who didn't hand in your assignment!
pg. 2: Oh you're saying something about my glasses? Or head? > Oh, did you say something about my glasses? Or were you talking about my head?
pg. 3: please be quiet during a class > please be quiet during class
pg. 4: you've been making troubles and being a nuisance to everyone else > you've been making trouble and being a nuisance to everyone else
pg. 5: it is done through the insertion of penis into the vagina > it is done through the insertion of the penis into the vagina
pg. 5: Oh, that's so? > Oh, is that so?
pg. 12: did she get all excited from having a deepthroat? > did she get all excited from getting deepthroated
pg. 14: did you boys understand about sex now? > do you boys understand sex now?
pg. 14: you guys have been paying attention on louise's womb, right? > you guys have been paying attention to louise's womb, right?
pg. 17: let's take turn > let's take turns
pg. 20: looks like everyone here already get the basic of sex and birth > looks like everyone here already gets the basics of sex and birth, or, looks like everyone here has gotten the basics of sex and birth

Base +17

@Mr_Person
pg. 2: because you're the only one who didn't hand your assignment! > because you're the only one who didn't hand in your assignment! [Fixed]
pg. 2: Oh you're saying something about my glasses? Or head? > Oh, did you say something about my glasses? Or my head? [I changed it slightly due to lack of space in the speech bubble]
pg. 3: please be quiet during a class > please be quiet during class [Fixed]
pg. 4: you've been making troubles and being a nuisance to everyone else [Is something wrong with "making troubles"? It's possible that there have been more than one trouble before. But I'll change it as you suggested anyway]
pg. 5: it is done through the insertion of penis into the vagina > it is done through the insertion of the penis into the vagina [Fixed]
pg. 5: Oh, that's so? -> Oh, that so? [This one I realize that I should have used "is that so?". However, due to the space limitation, I tried to twist it into something that more informal-sounding. But I guess I did made a mistake there with the " 's"]
pg. 12: did she get all excited from having a deepthroat? > did she get all excited from getting deepthroated [Fixed]
pg. 14: did you boys understand about sex now? > do you boys understand sex now? [Fixed]
pg. 14: you guys have been paying attention on louise's womb, right? > you guys have been paying attention to louise's womb, right? [Fixed]
pg. 17: let's take turn > let's take turns [Fixed]
pg. 20: looks like everyone here already get the basic of sex and birth > looks like everyone here already gets the basics of sex and birth [Fixed]

Damn, there are lot more typos than I expected. I guess this is the limitation of online grammar checker... I shall proofread further on my next project. Thank you for your review, Mr_Person.

I don't think I should re-upload new translation so soon, so I'm gonna upload a translation in a filehoster instead later on for those who are interested. Will be posting the link in a day or so, in case that there are more reply to come.

EDIT: https://anonfiles.com/b174u805y7/Shuudan_Boukou_Kyousei_Jutai_v1.1_zip
There you go, if there is anyone who's interested in it.

Last edited on 24 July 2022, 12:58.

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