Warning: Very extreme and some people may find it disgusting. Do contact me (hopelessbruhhh#3382 on discord, or hopelessbruhhh@gmail.com) for commissions, criticism, advice or HD images.

y,know, I think there may be such a thing as "too much"

EDIT: Fuck it, constructive criticism. Idk what you're tryna go for here. Is it bimbofication? Is it expansion? If you are new to this, my advice is to pick a lane and stick to it. Target one or two fetishes at a time, and if you want to do before-and-after things like this, try to practice restraint on your "afters". You have some talent here, and it shows in your befores. Maybe a little more work needs to be put into perspective, as its a bit all over the show. A good example of this would be on page 1, with Brenda. From the waist up, it looks like she's facing somewhat towards the viewer's left side. Not directly to the left, not directly to the viewer. Yet, moving further down, it looks like the same angle except she's directed away from the viewer. We shouldn't be seeing so much of her right calf if we're looking her body posturing waist up.

I know, I know. It's porn. I'm nitpicking on details. But when these details aren't well practiced, your viewer is going to be pulled out of the moment because somewhere in the back of their brain is a little voice screaming "THIS LOOKS WRONG".

Lastly, those eyes man... holy shit those eyes. That's some nightmare fuel shit. I took one look at it and had flashbacks to Ao Oni (look it up). This comes back to the whole "restraint" and "pick one thing at a time" tips i gave above.

Keep practicing, and feel free to continue submitting your work online, just try to practice restraint and not go to the maximum absurdity on all fetish fronts.

Last edited on 24 July 2022, 12:58.

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Holy shit!

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MEGA KAREN

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Directed by John Carpenter

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Reminds me of the original Hentaibee creations. Keep practicing by adding a few more panels per work. Once you shore up the basics of anatomy your transformations will be way better. Good luck!

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If I had one advice it would be to add a few steps rather than before/after

that way people who enjoy expansion but not as extreme can still enjoy 70/75% of your work

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great concept, keep up the good work. can't wait to see who gets transformed next

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Great idea, terrible execution
Keep practicing!

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