From COMIC Anthurium August 2022

rough grammar and also some of your TL is weird

p.1 why he already had a girlfriend > missing words here. "why did he...", maybe?
p.1 I'm... not the worst > you mean the opposite? in JP, stuff is often phrased in the negative, but it means the opposite. ex: "I'm just the worst, aren't I?"
p.1 has a nice booty > in JP it's body and not booty, but sure
p.2 they ripe with sweet flavor too > they are. also, this makes no sense.
p.2 she already soggy wet > she's already soaked
p.2 a sexy lingerie > cut "a"
p.2 what kind of erotic plans she has with the student she slept with? > what kind of naughty plans did she have
p.3 to have such a teacher like this > redundant

Last edited on 29 July 2022, 03:11.

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Thanks for the tips
Yes, I did make some changes like from nice body to nice booty.
I will try to avoid doing it in my next works

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page 1
"I'm a
professio
-nal
therapist"
The hyphen should be at the end of a word. So for example:
"I'm a profes-
sional therapist".

page 2
"She already soaked"
Either "she is already soaked" or "she's already soaked"

"What kind of naughty plans she has"
Probably "had"

page 3
"This uncle'd love to have ..."
>uncle'd
??

"... to have a slutty teacher like this to teach me all sort of thing..."
*things

"All sort of thing"
*things

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More like a professional rapist lmao

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