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(XTER) My Mother [Direct Translation][Final]

Doujinshi
Posted:2022-08-04 17:03
Parent:2290135
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:122.2 MiB
Length:101 pages
Favorited:2893 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.70

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Posted on 04 August 2022, 17:03 by:   anon_degen    PM
Uploader Comment
Follow the original creator, all of this is owned by him.
Facebook:https://www.facebook.com/xtercomic
Twitter:https://twitter.com/xtercomic/
This is translated from the original Thai version. Hope you enjoy it!

Edit*
This is it, the final version. I didn't plan on coming back to this but seeing as there were some grammar mistakes, I decided to fix them, as well as changing some dialogues to make them more natural and flow better. I also added more SFX and improved the previous ones. If there is ever going to be a complete version of this, I would hope this is it.

Thanks to @celltf and @VNProtaganist for pointing out grammar mistakes and suggesting improvements.

Edit 2*
Some files got mixed up and I uploaded unedited ones, it's all in order now.
Posted on 31 July 2022, 13:33 by:   HorridGuest    PM
Score +296
This feels bizarre. It reads left to right, but I feel like the panel design often flows right to left.
Posted on 31 July 2022, 17:06 by:   Zinbieel    PM
Score +23
This translation's pretty decent! It reads well. The only critique I have is that some more commas would help the readability and correctness of grammar a lot. For example: "If you're that burned out mom, why not stay?" The first half of the sentence reads like something completely different if you read it run-on, as it is punctuated. A comma before "mom" would disambiguate it and make it read smoother. Fixing these would take this translation from good to great.

I also appreciate translating some of the important SFX.
Posted on 31 July 2022, 17:16 by:   B1u3z    PM
Score +14
Thank you. I recall the other translations have rewrites and are mirrored, it would be good to have more alternatives for his other doujins.
Posted on 31 July 2022, 17:19 by:   Ahhshadup123    PM
Score -5
Do we ever get to see what Nont's dad looks like?
Posted on 31 July 2022, 17:51 by:   anon_degen    PM
Score +23
@Zinbieel Thanks for the constructive critique! Hope you liked it nonetheless.

@B1u3z Unfortunately I only did this because I wanted a version that was as accurate to the original as possible and because it has Mommy Nush in it. I dont have a lot of time IRL which is why it took me this long with this. So I wont be doing XTER's other works, sorry. But XNUMBERS has done a great job with them, and there's always the official versions too.

@Ahhshadup Yeah he appears in one of the My Sister works, but that got retconned. Even the mother was different then.
Last edited on 31 July 2022, 18:57.
Posted on 31 July 2022, 20:36 by:   IRmudkip    PM
Score +16
Thanks for doing a proper translation of this!

Not too bad for your first time. There a few nitpicks here and there but overall you did a pretty good job!
Posted on 01 August 2022, 06:06 by:   anon_degen    PM
Score +7
@IRmudkip Thanks! Just out of curiosuty can you list the nitpicks you have? I might come back to this at some point to improve and add the rest of the SFX, when and if I have the time. I'll try to fix up on other stuff too.
@Zinbieel If you want you can list yours too.
Thanks for the input.
Last edited on 01 August 2022, 06:31.
Posted on 01 August 2022, 09:22 by:   incogna777    PM
Score +9
As an ol' schooler boomeroid, I thought I might feel weird about the left-to-right reading. But this is a quality TL that takes the proper amount of liberty with the English language usage. Great job, and thanks for the contribution!
Posted on 01 August 2022, 19:17 by:   anon_degen    PM
Score +1
@incogna777 Thank you! I really appreciate it.
Posted on 01 August 2022, 22:49 by:   celltf    PM
Score +17
@anon_degen - Hey there, I sent you a message through the e-hentai forums regarding this with some notes if you'd like to update this at some point
Posted on 01 August 2022, 23:12 by:   anon_degen    PM
Score +1
@celltf Thanks, I appreciate the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, I'll fix them if I can. As for some other changes, it's more how the dialogue is expressed than anything else, so I wont change them. I'm new to e-hentai so you have any idea if I can make changes to this rather than uploading it all again?
Posted on 01 August 2022, 23:40 by:   celltf    PM
Score +17
@anon_degen - It's been a little bit since I uploaded anything but I believe you can. If you look at the top of the screen and go to My Uploads and select Manage for this upload I believe you can delete individual pages and replace them with the new ones. Just gotta make sure the pages are ordered correctly
Posted on 02 August 2022, 02:15 by:   cacount    PM
Score -44
Thank you for hijacking this from that weeb faggot
Posted on 02 August 2022, 03:19 by:   mattijo    PM
Score +7
we need threesome chapter with both mom and sister so bad
Posted on 02 August 2022, 11:37 by:   qazmlpok    PM
Score +33
@anon_degen The gallery management page has a "Create new version" button. Use that and make the changes. This version will remain visible but will be hidden from search results, and a line of text stating "A newer version of this gallery is available". Things like comments, ratings, and torrents will carry over to the new gallery.
Posted on 03 August 2022, 00:00 by:   VNProtagonist    PM
Score +26
Spelling
Pg 8 mid: atleast => at least
Pg 23 top, 87 top: ofcourse => of course
Pg 26 mid: fortunatly => fortunately
Pg 26 bot, 43 mid, 78 top: alchohol=> alcohol
Pg 88 bot: ...I'll might => ...I might

Changes to sound more natural
Pg 22 mid: ...had to go get wasted => ...had to go and get wasted
Pg 35 mid: ...feel more good => ...feel even better
Pg 48 bot: ...look so damn erotic => ...look so damn hot
Pg 49 mid: but it's not just your tits, that other girls can't compete with you in => lose the comma
Pg 55 bot: ...reaching all the way to where he came from => ...reaching all the way back to where he came from
Pg 67 top: There isn't any more space => There isn't any more room
Pg 69 top: ...first anal => ...first time doing anal
Pg 80 bot: He's started fingering me => He started fingering me

These were just what I could find and of course feel free to disagree.
Overall it was really good! You characterized the mommy personality wonderfully also it flows better and the font looks better than the other version. Not that that one is bad, this one is just better. Thanks for doing this.

Edit: Oh, wow. Thanks for coming back to this! Always nice to see a translator who takes pride in their work.
Last edited on 04 August 2022, 19:09.
Posted on 03 August 2022, 20:32 by:   XNumbers    PM
Score -13
@anon_degen

Aww, I was hoping you'd take over for future works too. I don't have much time myself since I'm more interested in doing manga that I like that aren't mainstream. Hopefully someone else has an interest in this artist since if another doujin comes out, it'll be very low priority for me. I'll probably wait more than a year and see if anyone does it.
Last edited on 04 August 2022, 07:28.
Posted on 04 August 2022, 14:20 by:   anon_degen    PM
Score +7
@celltf @qazmlpok @VNProtagonist Thanks for the help!

@XNumbers I'm in a similar situation, I don't have much time on my hands either. Real life waits for no one I guess. Even though I'm a fan of XTER as an artist I could never get into the My Sister series(to each their own, of course!), though I've had my eye on this work ever since it was announced. So, I only did this because it has Mommy Nush in it and because I wanted a version translated from the Thai directly. I might do My Mother 2(provided there is one) if it seems like it's necessary.
Thanks for translating the other works btw, without your effort we wouldn't have had any of XTER's works in proper english.
Last edited on 04 August 2022, 19:24.
Posted on 04 August 2022, 17:57 by:   innyinny    PM
Score +39
don't worry too much about all the nit picking, most people just appreciate someone translating a thai comic and don't expect perfection

i didn't even notice any issues

thanks for your work!
Posted on 05 August 2022, 05:51 by:   Ahryman    PM
Score +6
Amazing work, thank you for the direct translation.
Posted on 05 August 2022, 18:14 by:   mad_savior    PM
Score +7
Im thai and im very appreciate the effort to make a "readable" TL of this. really. the artist made alot from NSFW work to the point he can afford a high-end sex doll. lol

also about his H-anime. we should be concern about it. bocs it will made by company in taiwan...... and..... you know the situation. if war broke out. it may get cancel.
Posted on 05 August 2022, 21:32 by:   something-creative    PM
Score +61
*hits pipe*
I cannot think or comprehend of anything more cucked than having a son.
Honestly, think about it rationally. You are feeding, clothing, raising and rearing a son for at least 18 years solely so he can go and ravage another woman. All the hard work you put into your beautiful little boy - singing him lul- labies, taking him to sports practice, making sure he had a healthy diet to grow up big and strong, educating him, playing with him, giving him loving hugs. All of it has one simple result: his body is more enjoyable for the women that will eventually be fucked in every hole by him. Raised the perfect boy? Great. Who benefits? If you're lucky, a random woman who had nothing to do with the way he grew up, who marries him. She gets to ride his thick cock every night. She gets the benefits of his strong but sweet personality that came from the way you raised him. As a woman who has a son, you are LITERALLY dedicating at least 20 years of your life simply to raise a boy for another woman to enjoy. It is the ULTIMATE AND FINAL cuckquean Think about it logically.
Posted on 31 August 2022, 04:30 by:   Bijoseiai    PM
Score +10
It is a MOTHER'S DUTY to make her son(s) into men nyaaa~!
https://8chan.moe/voxxe/res/14890.html#q15052
Posted on 14 May 2023, 08:36 by:   eureka71993    PM
Score +6
Happy mothers day!
Sadly this year the new mother doujin didn'tmake it on time
Posted on 26 August 2023, 22:16 by:   l337t3r    PM
Score +8
anyone got link to HQ version of the animation?
Posted on 07 October 2023, 07:22 by:   anon_degen    PM
Score +4
anyone get their hands on the "Sex on the Beach" side chapter? the full colored 10 page manga, I really wanna translate that too.

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