What the fuck is that title lmao

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The handwriting looks great, actually.

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title:murdered

^ Should be a tag

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With a title that long, I was expecting an Isekai :P

Wording could use a bit of work, tho. Some dialogue looks a bit weird. Otherwise, it's good. Especially the sound effects.

@Opera93: ... OFFICIAL STUFF!? Damn, on one hand, we should be happy they do that, but on the other hand, it's nice to see E-H's typesetting and translating standards are better than those of DLsite.

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I love this artist's work, so nice to see more translations of it pop up.

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please don't translate bouncing tit onomatopoeia to "vroom vroom" or sex squelches to "shave shave" ever again.

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Looks great, but that font...

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Note: this is an "official" translation done by the artist and distributed by dlsite

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Reached the top of what?

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A CAT IS FINE TOO

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> Reached the top of what?

"reached the top" aka climaxed

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When reality won't give you a big tiddy catgirl gf 😔

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Man, the title's translation doesn't do justice to the original wording.

ENG - "reached the top"
JP -"DEMONIC ORGASM"

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