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[Momozumi Jun] Oshikake Dolce (COMIC Anthurium 2022-04) [English] [Digital]

[ももずみ純] おしかけドルチェ (COMIC アンスリウム 2022年4月号) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2022-08-17 05:13
Parent:2301440
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:11.24 MiB
Length:25 pages
Favorited:1338 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.43

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Posted on 17 August 2022, 05:13 by:   ero_ghoul    PM
Uploader Comment
If you like it, please Support the author by buying this book on:
https://book.dmm.co.jp/detail/k568agotp00427/
Posted on 16 August 2022, 22:34 by:   doomskull999    PM
Score +143
Man, this could really benefit from a proof reader who actually speaks English.
Posted on 16 August 2022, 23:25 by:   Vorin 22    PM
Score +47
Jesus christ just take the hot gyaru maid as your wife moron, you ain't gonna get anything better ffs.
Posted on 16 August 2022, 23:43 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +493
If you're gonna do gyarus, then I fucking BEG you to get a proofreader. Hell, I'll fucking do it for you. Don't ruin gyarus. You're doing yourself a huge disservice right now either way.

rough grammar

every page: Punctuation. PLEASE ADD PERIODS AND COMMAS.

p.1 so to avoiding
p.1 she tries to make conversations > conversation (this is a set phrase)
p.2 i live in a different world from hers > her
p.2 he never talk > talks
p.2 i was always nervous and feeling unfit, that is the trigger > complete nonsense. needs rephrasing.
p.3 chez > ??
p.4 what a big surprised > surprise
p.5 my mom hire you > hired
p.5 it's my agency's special policy, a maid-style house keeper > makes no sense. she's talking about her outfit, not the job itself
p.5 to cleanup > clean up
p.5 noway > no way

ETC
Posted on 16 August 2022, 23:59 by:   RileyWalker    PM
Score -100
Man you guys are such pussies.....you think this is bad? You shoulda been around back in the late 90s/early aughts. You'd be appreciating grammar of this level.
Posted on 17 August 2022, 00:28 by:   Zetsuke    PM
Score +277
>Gets touched by girl
>Locks himself in house for two years

Most well-adjusted redditor.
Posted on 17 August 2022, 04:01 by:   hatepie    PM
Score +100
>be a shut in, the hot girl will simply come to you!
I can't think of any reason this would ever happen.
Posted on 17 August 2022, 05:21 by:   PsychicDoom    PM
Score +11
There are still mistakes LMAO

Use Grammarly or some shit d00d
Posted on 17 August 2022, 05:31 by:   Remeark    PM
Score +127
@hatepie
Well, he said his family has money, soooo...
Posted on 17 August 2022, 06:03 by:   ero_ghoul    PM
Score +18
@cutegyaru
Lol, I'm trying. There are a few proofreaders who contacted me but I don't have money to pay for their service. And the only one who agrees on working for free is not an English native.
And sure, I will send you any gyaru-translation next time before publishing if you agree to help. Or if your group decides to translate the manga, I will skip it.

@PsychicDoom
Thanks for the suggestion but using tools won't help me improve myself.
Posted on 17 August 2022, 12:11 by:   cultt    PM
Score +112
>gyaru
>used goods pretending good girl
>whore
>gold digger to boot
Poor bastard.
Posted on 17 August 2022, 22:15 by:   Unreliability    PM
Score +63
You ever read something with an MC so fucking pathetic that your go flaccid? And it's not even NTR.
Posted on 18 August 2022, 06:41 by:   guitarhero    PM
Score +19
Didn't go flaccid cause she's still hot but it's really hard to ignore how pathetic the MC is in this.
Posted on 30 August 2022, 01:31 by:   viltras    PM
Score +44
She might be a gold digger but you all have to remember she is pretty much the only person who greets and call out to him even when she didn't know his family is rich.
Posted on 25 July 2023, 12:13 by:   Mochita    PM
Score +18
@cultt I mean, fair points, but if she can keep herself to just one guy, it's not that bad.

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