the translation is probably not satisfying since im relying on google translate

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Please, please don't use MTL and if you're not an English native speaker at least use a proofreader. Please.

Page 3.

That make me happy and embarassed > That makes me happy and embarrassed

...the slack limbs of old woman like me... > ...the slack limbs of an old woman like me

Page 4.

Ma'am, your is better than jeanne... > Ma'am, yours is better than Jeannes, or, Ma'am, you're better than Jeanne...

My penis is eager to I impregnate you. > My penis is eager to impregnate you

Page 5.

I don't know the detail but it seems... > I don't know the details, but it seems...

When I woke up, I meet the master, and there were various things that led to my daughter become heroic spirit > When I woke up, I met the Master, and there were various other things that led to my daughter becoming a Heroic Spirit.

I'm now able to life a calm life > I'm now able to live a calm life.

Until I accidently entered storage room holy grail > Until I accidently entered the storage room of the holy grail

Page 6:

Before I know it > Before I knew it

On a plain that remind me of my hometown > On a plain that reminded me of my hometown

It's seems... > It seems

...troublesome due to holy grail being involved... > ...troublesome due to the holy grail being involved...

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I can't breathe

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I was going to say "Wow, that was fast", but no it's just god awful machine translation. Hopefully someone was actually working on this and doesn't stop doing so because of this.

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>new translation
>It's some garbage MTL with the laziest editing ever
>hmmm I truly wonder who made this
>surely it's not an indonesian again
>it's an indonesian
what is wrong with that country, seriously

Last edited on 18 August 2022, 07:37.

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don't worry guys, my script is done. just wait

@LRaglan
I won't stop, I thought "damn it..." when I found this, but seeing is a MTL and it didn't even had proofread. Sorry, but this "work" is shit, and I can keep on mine

edit: https://e-hentai.org/g/2311053/1e33c41b02/

Last edited on 27 August 2022, 22:55.

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indofag being a dumbass once again, you know that your translation is bad, why bother uploading it to the fucking site? you just clutter up the site with your garbage.

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Yknow how yesterday is Indonesian's independence day? Yeah, I wish they never did.

Also, coffeedrug? I'm here waiting with my five stars.

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I'd like to point out that not all Indonesians deserve this level of hate. Just keep your criticisms only on the translation/proofreading and not being racist about it... though I admit that Indos are usually ones that majorly fuck up a TL.

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I'm thankful for one thing: Thanks to this... 'translation', I searched for the character because I didn't know her / didn't know if she was on FGO (japan) or not. As I'm only playing on US, it's possible that she would arrive later (or was part of an event that I missed) so I wanted to check that. But instead of finding her, I found something else: Jeanne Mama. Link: https://e-hentai.org/g/1578196/0d05d26f61/

So... Thanks for that.

As for the rest, I believe Mr_Person and the others have already said everything that needed to be said.

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God damn it, Can't get hyped for shit anymore.

MTL ruining yet an other doujin....

Or not, Thanks Coffedrug for saving this from the MTL trash pile.

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here's the thing that i don't understand, most of ppl in indonesia who do this kind of garbage translation are for money. now why in the fuck they upload this mtl in here?
its not giving them anykind of revenue anyway.
its either for gathering some "hate point" or just the excuse of "well i'm just training lol"
sry for ranting.

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I think he just do it for free and want to share it. The reason is why he chose this site because this is the only H-Site that can still be accesses (pornografi is a serious crime in Indonesia and can result jail time)

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im offended

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Lmao a new la faux doujin translation.
>MTL
>lazy editing
Bruh, it's okay to take your time with.
Especially if English is hard for you.

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Please, if any website staff is here just start banning accounts that post MTLs. It's a waste of everyone's time.

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...Did I miss something? How do we know the uploader is Indonesian?

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The "rough grammar" tag is an understatement.

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@gigasgmx
Read his name.

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