Playing translation telephone, going from JP > KR > ENG never really works out, especially when English isn't your native language. You might want to look for someone to proofread your scripts or preferably just stick to translating from a language you know into another language you know.

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and ended up with a small sole company that would accepted me > and ended up being accepted by a small company

transparant > transparent

I have most followers in my group > I have the most followers in my group

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Good works, everybody! > Good work, everybody!

possitive > positive

irritate > irritated

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...are the most suitable members for what client requested > ...are the most suitable members for what the client requested

If only I get a chance... > If only I got a chance, or, If they only gave me a chance...

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It only hurts my head if I stuck in this thought > It'll only hurt my head if I keep thinking about it...

Introduce us to such a big deal... > Introducing us to such a big deal...(I got a feeling it's more like, giving us such a big deal)

Well, it is now depend on how hard you work > Well, now it all depends on how hard you work

Then I shall taste these sweet little ass at the hotel > Then I shall taste these sweet little asses at the hotel

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thanks for the correction... Actually, it was proofread when it was uploaded. Problem is, if I remember correctly, none of the translation team were native English speakers.

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I don't really know if you can call that proofreading...

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