my second edit still learning, i took some risks in some pages others have little mistakes i hope i fix when i solve some issues with my pc i think improved a little

"Fuck with me if you want to live."

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You made me revisit such a good story, and not in the accursed webtoon format. Many thanks for your effort.

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The only time I didn't curse the webtoon format was when I was reading ReLIFE. Hentai webtoons, on the other hand, I curse with all my being.

Thanks for the time and effort expended on this.

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@lurphysmaw

"Cum IN me if you want to live."

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any suggestions for next practice?

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I'm still coping that the manga version would get an english digital version somewhere instead of this scuffed edit, since the korean translation has one

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wow, you made the annoying korean infinite scroll webtoon format into an actually readable normal-looking manga, awesome!
(though i have to credit the original for not having all that many screen-tall white spaces and repeating 3 screens worth of panels at the start of every chapter. how un-korean-ish of it... unless i looked at the wrong "original" and it was already edited too, idk)

but re: the story...
what did the future girl do, just live on separately in this timeline? drown herself? beamed up back to the mothership? what was with that news bit about the fallen beam? why can't this author make one bit of sense?

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A bittersweet ending. It would've been a happier ending if the future Megu had been able to stay and somehow get accepted by her past self, lol. But this is fine, too. It's a good story, something I can't say about many hentai manga.

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