My first ever TL published here. Kinda nervous. Sorry if there's any mistakes. Please do support the artist. むちも https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/14399515 https://twitter.com/mottirimuttiri
Original Source: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/98478365
1. Don't use Manga Temple. It's honestly a doodoo font and a newbie trap (first result in Google for "MANGA FONT") CCVictorySpeech, Wild Words, Spiner Rack BB, Richard Starkings are all good starter fonts. 2. Punctuate please.
Some extra resources:
General resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/ Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/ Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials