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Much better, see this is what I meant when I told you about keeping to a theme. You aren't all over the show with different scenes, different fetishes, etc etc. Short, sweet, and it serves as a good sample of your work.

I'm still largely critical of the off-putting proportions, things like the legs being so ungodly long like in Sarah11.png, it looks like she's spent too many hours on one of those stretchy torture racks, and it's a little disconcerting. The fonts as well are a little hard to read. Maybe increase the font size a little? You might have to sacrifice dialogue for that but, idk, could just be me.

In any case, good progress.

Base +8, SexualStalin +6