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>go for a Harem fantasy
>outright have one of the girls admit to still be doing compensated dating even after the supposed Hook-up.

Interesting choice...

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me: it's just a bunch of prostitute letting him fuck them for free with sus heavy child support ending

mr incredible: HAREM IS HAREM !

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Shinzo Abe's spirit is smiling at this development.

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yuki better be gunnin for a good job he gon have to raise 3 kids and take care of 3 wives

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p6. I shouting (wrong verb tense)
p11. Yuuki or Yuki?
p11. ...and feed me (wrong verb tense)
p11. ...wrapped their arm to me (grammatically incorrect)
p11. Maybe I wasn't run over by that truck that day and reincarnated in another world... (check your sentence and see if it fits the story.)
p12. Isn't you only need eyes (Wrong wrong wrong! Also no appropriate punctuation mark)
p13. This breasts... (This or these? Even if this is grammatically correct I don't think this has been translated well)
p14. I never heard that! (I get the idea but the sentence is clearly wrong.)
p14. ...they tickling me...
p18. (Damn it, it gets excited...) (Again I get the idea but the sentence is clearly wrong.)
p19. I've never experienced anything that size (grammatically incorrect)
p19. What is that... (Again and again I get the idea but you should phrase this better.)
p20. I knew it Hanamiya-san does... (Sentence is grammatically incorrect due to the absence of punctuation marks at appropriate places.)
p20. I gave him a blowjob with my throat. (Wow. So you poke a hole in your throat then blow the guy with said hole?)
p20. This uncle's was pretty big buat... (Phrase it better. Also misspelled word.)
p20. Yuuki or Yuki?
p21. You have saved my life so... (Please use the simple past tense for this sentence...)
p22. You're not flirting with him, right! (Grammatically incorrect)
p23. ...blindfolded game...

I'm sure I can find more if I read the whole thing but this is enough. I'm not this group's proofreader; I'm just here to see if this release warrants a poor grammar tag.
EDIT: Can't do it myself as I don't have the appropriate mod powers for that, and I can't vote for it after the "poor grammar" tag changes.

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make sure to add the rough grammar tag yourself as well.
Edit: No worries I got your back.

Last edited on 14 September 2022, 16:36.

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nice translation no one care if there some mistake dont pay attention to those loser

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@medkittestspeed
"nice translation no one care if there some mistake dont [sic] pay attention to those loser"

Bruh, this you?

[Kunaboto] Disgaea - Rozalin(21sai).settoku [English] [Medkittestspeed]
https://e-hentai.org/g/1854564/b88daf47ec/

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Well dude is a responsible hard working man he will manage to make them happy. As for the country who allows polygamy I suggest move into south east Asia like Indonesia or Brunei (low cost of living)

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Edit: nvm already tagged

edit2: re-doing this.

Last edited on 18 September 2022, 02:08.

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Is it even his baby ?

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Story is kind of crap tbh

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Truck-kun isn't the hero we deserve, but the hero we need.

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@lurphysmaw
LMAOOOO its noit bad at all lol

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https://imgur.com/a/PLDrS7N (deleted/hidden comment by medkittestspeed)

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its hidden because you dowvoted it why are you taking a screenshot lmao

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This is great if you like slutty girls and want a fun harem of gal sexfriends. I enjoyed it. Still, what are the chances he really the father? He's really gonna find a way to marry them all and take responsibility when they're like that? Well, it takes all kinds I guess. I'd have been fine with just the sex myself....

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Lmao as a professional translator, I can't imagine asking for MONEY for this hack-job of a translation

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I never understand authors who fetishize wanting girls that fuck around on you and fuck as many people as possible, or are literal whores, but "the protag gets with them so it's cool". Like maybe someone who did it in the past, but someone who actively does it, that's not a win either way. Girl shows you a video of her fucking a hundred men, why the fuck is that supposed to turn you on? I don't get the logic to MC getting off to girls showing him just how many other guys they fuck.

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@Sylphon

Its Hentailand. Not everything has to make sense.

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"I am going to study to university and study hard"? They are pregnant right now, man! You need money now.

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Truck-kun did it again.

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They made him into a man and he made them into mothers.

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I mean, I don't necessarily need my heroines to be as pure as the freshly fallen snow, but prostitutes for partners are a gamble. But MC-kun seems happy, the girls seem to genuinely like him and while it's not stated, I'm assuming they're in a relatively exclusive harem relationship and no longer compensated dating, and there's no evidence or reason to suspect foul play. Good on him.

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I guess the part time job took its toll on the MC, on page 38 you can see the dude is actually little ripped under that average looking guy clothes.

Shirogane was the most sexy of the gal hooker's

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