First translation, I'll try to make more in the future

1. This reads like a machine translation.
2. Wrong resolution. You used the 1280x version of the images. Download the archive or download the non-downsized torrent.
3. Awful font.

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Quote:"First translation, I'll try to make more in the future"

At your current skill level please don't. I ran the first page through google translate to compare it with your translation and your TL reads even worse than machine translated.

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Having the Vocaloid program read/narrate this mess of a "translation" would be mildly entertaining.

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"I am so tense already, isn't I!?"
"When I put on the bikini, I already knew what they were going to do to you, and I went into heat?"

Knowing that an actual human saw and typed in those exact "sentences" into some program and thought "yep this looks good to me!" is both inconceivably funny and saddening.

There's no way that you believe that any of this is a "translation" don't lie to yourself.

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>Pacomin
>Paizuri Miku
>English
>Oh boy here I
>MTL

OH COME ON

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Paizuri translated as "fucking" on the second to last page, yeah, that's an MTL 100% lol
Yeah bro you should really go brush up on your Japanese before attempting another in the future

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Brb, gonna commission a good translation

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You could have literally made up the dialogue and it would have been more accurate than the MTL. No seriously, what software did you even use to get results *that* bad? I am genuinely impressed.

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