"I used to be with ‘it’, but then they changed what ‘it’ was. Now what I’m with isn’t ‘it’ anymore and what’s ‘it’ seems weird and scary. It’ll happen to you!" but it's ganmarei's hentai.. Used to be one of my fav artists but things are gettin stranger and stranger

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"Worm lady"
I think you mean "worman."

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You might wanna PR a bit harder to make sure you get all those articles in. I know they don't really use em in other languages but it's really jarring in English. Besides that, you've also messed up some punctuation in a few bubbles, i.e. missed capitalization mostly. A thing that is totally understandable to miss as well is on the last page, you missed some text on the top right between the dude and the chick's head, but it's so small and easily missed that literally anyone could've made that mistake.

Page 2.

An old couple of distant relatives raised me after losing my parents. > An old couple of distant relatives raised me after I lost my parents.

...of certain old barn on the estate's... > ...of a certain old barn on the estate's

Page 3.

What stood out first in such dark place was someone's body. > What stood out first in such a dark place was someone's body.

The floorboards creaked at her slightest moves > The floorboards creaked at her slightest movements/movement

Those noises made people take for granted there was a ghost inhabiting this dilapidated building, refusing to let anyone in. (this whole sentence is a bit weird, 'take for granted' isn't used like that so idk what you meant.)

Page 5.

It was at that moment when I realized the fabric covered furniture in the surroundings was, actually, part of her body. > It was at that moment that I realized that the fabric covered furniture surrounding her was actually part of her body.

Page 13.

butterflies larvae > butterfly larvae

Page 20.

...if she feel guilty... > ...if she feels guilty...

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Strangely cute in the end.

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Technically caterpillar lady not worm. Some languages don't differentiate between any worm-like invertebrate but in english "caterpillar" has a less gross vibe because it specifically means lepidoptera. Probably because of what the adult form is and also because caterpillars are generally less disgusting looking than other insect grubs.

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