Thank you for reading my third public release! This is my first project where there’s two versions (Shaved and pubic hair) so I was happy I could copy-paste a bit.

THis is a one-man project. This means translation, editing and proofreading is all done by one person.

I usually have to re-draw certain parts to clean up the versions from japanese characters. In most cases, this goes well. I do hope you won’t be able to spot it, but I’m sure you can if you compare it to the originals.

Please direct criticism, suggestions and potential translation requests to: wanderingcitizen@proton.me

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Raw link from the website and the sources of the author.

https://e-hentai.org/g/2338535/9fa6fc2549/

https://takaman.fanbox.cc/
https://www.pixiv.net/users/2722726
https://twitter.com/vakan12

https://takaman.fanbox.cc/posts/4420616
https://takaman.fanbox.cc/posts/4420626

Wrong resolution. You used the downsized 1280x versions. Original is 4299 x 6071. Download the archive or download the non-downsized torrent (right side.)

As a side note, writing descriptions for SFX ("slapping noises", for example) is very unsexy lol

edit: If you're gonna sub SFX, treat it the same way as normal SFX. For example, instead of "squishing noises" > Squish/Squelch. Instead of "strong ejaculation" > Spuuuurt!

Last edited on 03 October 2022, 15:41.

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Hello there,

Thank you for that information, I had not realized. I'll get the better resolution ASAP and see to having it exported to them.

Onto the side note. I fully agree, but I have no real other method I can convey the noises without re-drawing them and they generally take up a bit -too- much screen space for that to be viable. If you have any better SFX note ideas, I'm all up for it though to improve this! :)

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@Wandering Citizen

In regarding SFX, if you don't want to fully redraw than you could place the english translation small next to the original SFX (examples this page https://e-hentai.org/s/12d50bff96/1686919-202 + the 2 following pages) or go the lazy way of most translators: If they're not inside a bubble don't translate them.

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she really went "mandatory penis inspection, drop your pants"

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I can't believe someone would translate Maya doujin. Sure Atago and Takao is nice but Maya and Choukai is also a nice broad.

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